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Tales From The 'Verse - Kaylee
Wednesday, September 27, 2006
First character description, of our lovely Mechanic. :) Again, part of my Big Damn English Project.
CATEGORY: FILK TIMES READ: 2438 RATING: 9.0 (G) SERIES: FIREFLY
I had fun writing this one. :)
The project: http://www.fireflyfans.net/thread.asp?b=2&t=24263>HERE.
Comments
Wednesday, 27 September 2006 21:23
Nice one.
I hate to be pedantic, but the line "Her name’s Kaywinnit Lee Frye, or just Kaylee." actually has 11 beats to it, not 10.
I hate to be pedantic, but the line "Her name’s Kaywinnit Lee Frye, or just Kaylee." actually has 11 beats to it, not 10.
Thursday, 28 September 2006 01:54
And I hate to be picky...but Kaylee/Jewel's hair wasn't red during the series. Probably got that from the red/earth toned environment of Serenity's engine room...but Kaylee/Jewel is a brunette;)
Still...mighty fine poem, Shrouded:D
BEB
Still...mighty fine poem, Shrouded:D
BEB
Thursday, 28 September 2006 02:00
Thanks for that, Teachdaire.
And, you, too, BEB. I changed it to "golden-brown" (since it does have a golden tint to it, just a bit. ;) ).
And, you, too, BEB. I changed it to "golden-brown" (since it does have a golden tint to it, just a bit. ;) ).
Saturday, 30 September 2006 23:17
This was cute! I'm going to hafta read them all now...
Sunday, 01 October 2006 17:36
I figure since the prologue was good, and this is good, I almost don't need to read the rest to know their quality. But I will. Keep up the good work.
Saturday, 02 July 2011 14:39
Shiny stuff.
Ooh, the thought of Jewel/Kaylee as a redhead...oooooohhhh... :)
Ooh, the thought of Jewel/Kaylee as a redhead...oooooohhhh... :)
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