Serenity: Chapter One: Six Years Passed
Friday, June 15, 2007
Firefly Novelization: Chapter one: Six years after the war, Malcolm Reynolds still longs to be free - no matter what that entails.
CATEGORY: FICTION
TIMES READ: 2068
RATING: 8.0 (PG)
SERIES: FIREFLY
AN: First chapter, second installment. Firefly is owned by Joss (my master) Whedon.
Prologue http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=16884>HERE.
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CHAPTER ONE
Six Years Passed
Mal had thought he had hit an all-time low when he took that job to steal a box of rare candied apples from an orphanage. Now he realized he had thought wrong. Currently hanging upside down in the inky blackness of space, Mal faced the destroyed derelict transport that was carrying the goods he was now trying to pilfer. The problem? There was nobody there to stop him. Everybody on board this wreck was undoubtedly dead.
So I’ve moved from stealing candy from children to stealing protein from the dead, Mal thought bitterly, eying the sealed entry to where the cases should be, I’m a real good guy.
It had been almost six years since the Independents had lost to the Alliance. Those six years had felt like a lifetime. It had started out rough. Naturally, the Browncoats had been despised and stereotyped against for a good long while. After a bit, though, the resentment towards them had started to die down, so Mal found it easier to move about freely. It took him several years, but with a little clever bargaining the Sergeant had become Captain of a small, reputable (though in horrible shape) Firefly-classed spaceship he named Serenity.
Mal glanced behind him at the two people floating in space with him. Zoë had followed him far; there was no doubt about that. Six years later, she was still his right-hand-woman. She was also still as fearsome as ever, and he respected her for that. She had been his strength, and he was never regretful that she had decided to come along on his quest for freedom.
The other was a man who had been on his crew for the least amount of time. Jayne Cobb was a rough, tough hired hand who had proved himself in a pinch more than a few times. Of course, that didn’t mean Mal trusted him. Hell, he didn’t trust the man much at all. He always kept an eye out, making sure
Friday, 15 June 2007 16:10
Umm, are you just planning on writing each and every detail of every episode in this form? If so, that's not really a fanfic, I only saw one thing that was actually added (plus a few thoughts here and there that weren't spoken in the show). Well written, but that's no surprise since it's not exactly original material.
Friday, 15 June 2007 16:57
It occurs to me that perhaps Jayne was one of the first people they hired. In Out of Gas, it looks like Mal and Zoe are the only real crew so far, although in order for Serenity to be out on a job, Kaylee and Wash had to be on board. But I do think that Jayne came before Inara, because Mal would never have kept the dirty thug around once the Companion showed up unless he had proved himself in some fashion. Also, Inara's line about Mal's "operation" could be referring to Jayne in particular and the messy ship in general.
But that's just me rambling on. Well done!
~MG
Friday, 15 June 2007 20:31
jondesu - That's why it's called a novelization. Have you ever read the Serenity novelization? It's a lot like that. Except instead of the movie, I'm attempting the episodes.
Miranda - throughout the series, I don't think Mal really considered Inara part of the crew - especially not at the beginning. That's why I said Jayne was the newest member.
Tuesday, 19 June 2007 03:19
While I enjoyed this immensely, I have mixed bag feelings about the whole project honestly. Basically, other than the odd bit of extra material - character thoughts, narrative exposition of background info, etc. - what we see here is previously crafted material..which arguably could be construed as barely-avoided plagiarism. Though I have to say...what you HAVE added is quite well done;D
BEB
Tuesday, 19 June 2007 12:28
Then, may I ask, wouldn't the Serenity movie novelization also be considered barely-avoided plagiarism? I'm not trying to plagiarize - hell, I would never even dream of stealing Joss's work. I'm just trying to do what Keith R.A. DeCandido did with Serenity with Firefly.
Tuesday, 19 June 2007 12:28
Oh, yeah, but thank you!
Tuesday, 19 June 2007 12:29
Then, may I ask, wouldn't the Serenity movie novelization also be considered barely-avoided plagiarism? I'm not trying to plagiarize - hell, I would never even dream of stealing Joss's work. I'm just trying to do what Keith R.A. DeCandido did with Serenity with Firefly.
Thank you, though. :)
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