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SEEN BETTER DAYS - PART 2

Tuesday, September 12, 2006

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2917    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Again, I'd like to thank all the shiny browncoats who helped with this creation. If you haven't read the previous chapter, I recommend you do.

http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=12791>Seen Better Days - Prologue and Part 1

PART 2

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Serenity left Arcadia without its new pilot, and made haste across the black towards Peresphone to deliver Badger’s cargo, which was carefully strapped onto the deck of the cargo hold. Its destination was logged into the databoard. Serenity's crew and new passenger, sat in the mess area, eating the last remanants of protein that was stacked in the pantry.

Life for the crew over the past few months had been quiet, very quiet. Business had slowed, not just because they harboured two known fugitives, or because they lost their only constantly paying passenger, Inara, but because of the new threat that faced the ‘verse, the uprising of the new coalitions.

The Alliance had suffered tremendously when the reaver situation was exposed to the public. They had found it difficult to defend their actions and slipped slowly away to the depths of failure, leaving a large gap in the calm of society. As the citizens rebelled, several new coalitions formed, fighting hard against each other to win the hearts of the citizens of the 'verse.

Disputes over who should rule the 'verse had climaxed and three groups emerged in power. The Blue Sun Corporation, who owned a majority of the known 'verse, claimed they were the legitimate power.

The Independents took advantage of the confusion, and tried again to rally the little people despite their loss to the Alliance.

Finally, a new faction emegered, The Red Moon Organization. Little was know of them, however they were also claiming sovereignty.

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“So, what do ya do for a living, J.D?” Kaylee questioned, pushing her protein mash around the plate.

“I’m a freelancer,” J.D replied, raising a small spoonful of mash to her mouth. The smell overwhelmed her as she closed her eyes and shovelled i

Comments
Tuesday, 12 September 2006 05:08
Two down, many more to go. Keep the brilliance comin'
Tuesday, 12 September 2006 10:38
“Kaylee!!” Mal interupted, lifting his gaze from his meal to J.D, adding, “I’m sorry, they don’t get out much.”
~hahahahaha

Least this way they won’t think I’m a ravin’ psychopath
“Job’s already taken.”
~Excellent

Of course, I am left wondering about J.D.'s past, which is a good quality in a stoy to me. Keep it up.
Tuesday, 12 September 2006 11:10
Wowza! This girl is gonna be trouble for the crew, but I like her! I can see her as being family by the end.

And I must know more about her! More, Please?
Tuesday, 12 September 2006 11:13
I hope JD decides to stay, I think she could maybe have a good home on Serenity. Wonder what planet they landed on for their impromptu refueling? Hope it isn't Memphis... Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Saturday, 16 September 2006 16:18
Oh...this is wonderful stuff here, JorjaReynolds. Pains me to think I could have helped shaped this, had I not failed on my promise:(

Still...this is great storytelling here, as you're doing the right amount of stringing us along about J.D. and her background, and her slow integration with the crew:D

BEB
Wednesday, 20 September 2006 03:17
Sorry it took me so long to get a review done on this. Good stuff you've got here and I'm excited to see you continue it.

“Freedancer, huh? Sounds interestin’. I could use a little free dancin’,” Jayne commented, grabbing the bowl of mash from the centre of the table. *Good Jayne, he is always putting his foot in his mouth some way or another. Good voice for him here.

Looking forward to a continuance, and I want to know more about JD, her past and her secrets.
Wednesday, 01 November 2006 02:23
Very good as usual! Still has good flow and the character voices continue to be true to form.

Can't wait for more!

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