Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

A Blast From The Past - Part 2

Tuesday, June 13, 2006

An old friend of Mal's, tries to confront him, and her own past. This is my second fic. All suggestions accepted. More parts to come.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2926    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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I strongly recommend that you read my first fic first:

http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=10532>A Blast From The Past Part 1

Also like to thank my beta's spacefulofobjects, Agent rusco and numerous others for their continous support and comments. ___________________________________________________

Jorja awoke dazed and confused, unsure of where she was or even why she was there. She tried to reach up, but she couldn't, her hands were cuffed behind her back.

She lifted her head, it throbbed with pain. Peering around the room she tried to absorb her surroundings. The room was small, and very clean, not a speck of dirt to be seen. It came to her; she knew where she was now, an Alliance interrogation room.

"How did I get here?" She thought to herself, closing her eyes, searching the memories. She tried desperately to remember, but the more she dug into her thoughts, the more pain she had to endure. She distantly recalled the scene at the grave, talking to Mal then the Alliance ships.

"Great. My head hurts, I can't move, what else could possibly happen?" she murmured to herself as the door to the room flung open.

Standing there was a man of average build, who appeared to be in his mid-thirties. She pondered, "If only my hands were free, I could easily take out this punk"

"Good, you're awake. My name is Frank Harris, and you are?" Inquired the man as he entered the room, shutting the door behind him.

"Rookie," She thought to herself as she wiggled in her cuffs, trying to free herself and then replied, "Not bad considering the circumstances."

"You're name, my dear?" Frank asked, puzzled at her lack of response.

Not wanting to reveal her true name, she replied with the first name that came to mind, "Jane, Jane Doe."

"What is your REAL name woman?" Frank replied visibly becoming upset by her lying distractions.

"All right then. Eve, as in Adam and Eve." She replied, trying to keep a straight face. "He won't crack me, no one has yet."

Comments
Tuesday, 13 June 2006 03:54
Good descriptions, excellent bacground.

Opens the window to a little more of the 'verse. Well done!
Tuesday, 13 June 2006 05:41
nicely shaped up. you are far better at sustaining a plot than I...
Tuesday, 13 June 2006 09:23
I have a good idea who the 'intruder' is. If she turned to protect her family what happened to them? Are they still alive or in some Alliance prison? Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 13 June 2006 11:40
I don't know why it made the post anonymous, but that was me.
Tuesday, 13 June 2006 20:51
You are doing a great job at describing Jorja to the reader. We learn a little more about her in each episode. I especially liked her thoughts about the battle that she shot Mal in.

"Jorja awoke dazed and confused, unsure of where she was or even why she was there. She tried to reach up, but she couldn't, her hands were cuffed behind her back."

"Blackness took her again, as his fist struck her face."

"Her remark was met with another square punch to the face, causing her to go unconscious again."

I wonder when our heroine is going to get a chance to fight back. What with making smart comments and then fading to black as much as she does.

Good fic Jorja...hope to read more of you soon.
Wednesday, 14 June 2006 04:33
Getting mighty interesting here, Jorja;)

Can't wait for the next part and all of its shiny goodness:D

BEB
Thursday, 15 June 2006 02:55
oh gap, i though she was a goner there for a sec *whew*

next fic please?

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