Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

Sleep Study (part 2 of 2)

Thursday, September 7, 2006

second of a 2-parter that, if you so desire, can be interpreted as following Tingles/Shivers. Rayne.

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Rating: PG13, to be safe

Disclaimer: the usual, all Joss's

Author's Note: occurs post-BDM, but Wash is here. Also this was getting long, so there's a bit more that I will post later. Can a two-parter have an epilogue? Eh, either way, this one will. Comments are much appreciated!

Sleep Study (part 2 of 2)

The next morning, Simon beat River and Jayne to the table. He was seated before he noticed that no one else was serving them self. All attention was on the empty doorway. He glanced around and registered who was missing, and realized they were waiting for River and/or Jayne.

When those two appeared, though, there didn’t seem anything significant about their arrival, aside from the fact that they were together. Hmm . . . Simon’s eyes began to narrow as he followed his sister’s walk across the room. Jayne was following, focused completely on the breakfast that was laid out. They weren’t interacting at all, but there was something . . . they looked like they were together. Not in a just-met-in-the-corridor manner, but in a walked-here-with-each-other way. It wasn’t something Simon had observed them to do before. Speculations percolating through his mind, he watched them serve themselves, all with a quiet companionship that was notable only for its newness.

“So,” Mal’s voice, so devoid of expression that Simon glanced over check the look on his face, “we’re a mite calm this morning.” Just that, nothing in it to stimulate the glare Jayne sent his way. Had there been a slight emphasis on the word ‘this’? Simon heard Wash choke back a snort, and when he looked that way Zoë was giving her husband one of those private ‘hush-up’ looks.

“I for one am glad to see you two getting along better,” Simon asserted, giving his sister a proud-big-brother nod.

Wash snorted again, and Simon heard “what they’re getting is”- before Zoë muttered a warning, “husband.” What was that about?

Kaylee hastened to lend Simon her support.

“Especially if you two are going to

Comments
DEEPGIRL187
Thursday, 07 September 2006 18:09
“Actually, it’s not a crime, ever since River’s eighteenth birthday. On some worlds, not since her sixteenth. Or fourteenth even,” Wash offered.

That line was hi-larious. Like the laugh-out-loud kind. Great job, and keep out the good work.
Friday, 08 September 2006 15:26
Sorry I didn't comment on this before - but I really do love the way you write River and Jayne ... and I cannot wait to see how this sleep study turns out. If Jayne ends up going under the knife for River to fix his snoring that is some serious devotion.

Please continue to write these two - you do it with tenderness, humor and sexiness and that is a great combo!
Saturday, 09 September 2006 15:38
Thanks for the great encouragement; it really helps to know people like my efforts, and why! I gobble up comments like a starving person . . .
The epilogue will be up in a few days, I promise.
Sunday, 10 September 2006 19:49
This was totally brilliant, icebreather! Especially when Jayne manages to engage the "Trendelenberg Button";)

Oh...and the bombshell drop at the breakfast table wasn't half-bad either, though it was kinda upstaged by Simon's incredible sucker punch to Jayne in the cockpit:D

BEB
Monday, 30 October 2006 07:32
awesome! i love your stuff - read you on tea n' dumplings before. you made me laugh out loud:

“You don’t want to be finishing that sentence,” Zoë warned, rising to her feet from Wash’s other side to face off against Simon... Zoë met his gaze flatly... “’scuse me lamby-toes, Mr. Hyde, but how about I just retract my own statement and we avoid violence?”
“Won’t be violence of any kind happenin’,” Mal asserted, pushing his plate away with a regretful sigh and standing.

perfect characterization and hi-larious! its hard to find good funny-wash fic and you got it spot on.

Thursday, 08 March 2007 14:16
Aaw! Jayne admitting that he couldn't sleep without River was just the sweetest thing. That's not the only reason I loved this chapter though, the breakfast scene and the follow-up was just hysterical. I loved Wash and Simon particularly, but everyone's voices were spot on. Woot!

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