Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Bunks and Beans

Monday, August 28, 2006

Just a bit of random blurbiness about what may of happen Mal and Zoe's first night on Serenity, before she got all gussied up.

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Mal plopped his bags on the foredeck of Serenity. He had a broad grin on his face. “So anyone you want.” Mal pointed to the 6 bunks that lined the foredeck.

He watched Zoë as she just looked over the ship again.

“It ain’t that bad Zoë. Soon as we get a crew and get her running again…she’s gonna be home, Zoë.”

Zoë gave a slight smile as she descended into one of the bunks. Mal heard shooting and quickly slid down the rungs of the bunk. “Not one day on my boat and you’re already shooting things.”

Zoë put her gun back into the holster. Mal looked down on the floor of the bunk and there laid the body of a dead creature. Mal bent down to get a closer look at the dead critter. “Mmmm dinner.” Mal smiled.

Zoë just sighed and climbed back up. “So…you don’t want this bunk?”

Mal climbed back up and as he did Zoë also was came up from a bunk. “I’ll take this one.” She pointed to the bunk that she just came from.

“That’s the captain’s bunk.”

“And it’s also the biggest.”

“Zoë, you can’t have the captain’s bunk. It’s the captain’s bunk. That’s why it’s called the captain’s bunk. And I’m the captain so by default I get the captain’s bunk.”

Zoë stepped closer to Mal. He just stood his ground eyeing her down. Mal had been in many battles with Zoë on and off the battle field. He knew if he showed any signs of weakness it would be over and he would loose the big bunk.

“Sir.” Zoë said coolly. “If you expect me to stay on this…” She looked around the foredeck. Something green dripped down from above. She dodged the liquid. “piece of go se you call a ship, then I’m going to need the bigger bunk.”

“Zoë I think that you’re forgetting one fundamental fact here, it’s the captain’s bunk and since I’m the captain. And it’s my boat.” Mal crossed his arms. His point had been made.

Zoë stepped closer avoiding the green liquid that dripped from above. “Good point, sir.”

Mal smiled. “I just won argument with corporal Zoë Alleyene and lived to tell about it? Mal thought as he rejoiced to himself.

“Mal.” Zoë said as sweetly as pos

Comments
Monday, 28 August 2006 05:58
Not too bad. Sounds a bit stiff, but I like the direction.
Monday, 28 August 2006 12:49
That was really good. Please do continue it. Zoe pulling gender-rank on the Captain is awesome!!
Monday, 28 August 2006 16:04
This is a nice gentle look at those first days or hours on the boat but you could do with a beta. Apart from that I loved Zoe pulling that guilt trip on Mal, the rodent something Zoe shot in the bunk and side stepping the dripping green goo. I'm guessing they need a housekeeper then a cook. Once she's shiny it'll be time to get her flying. Is there going to be more? Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 28 August 2006 20:17
This was great! I always love Mal and Zoe's relationship, and you did a good job in portraying it.
Tuesday, 29 August 2006 01:27
Still chuckling. Nice touch with the boot gnawing in the dark. It's a very Firefly ending to a story.
Friday, 01 September 2006 03:06
Oh...the ending was hilarious! And I could totally see Zoe guilt tripping Mal into the bigger bunk;)

BEB

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