Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Pulling the trigger is easy; it’s the backlash that hurts. Ch. 6: And We All Fall Down

Sunday, August 13, 2006

Chapter 6 is finally up, I was fighting a bit of writers block, but I got it done yeah. Jayne, Kaylee, Wash, and Simon aren't looking too good. Everything seems like is going downhill pretty fast.

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Jayne walked briskly through the darkened hallways each chamber brought him to rows upon rows of endless doors and deserted cells. The old prison was a link to death, a connection displayed in the many abandoned nooses, bullet casings, and skeletal fragments, each afflicted with time; the affects of aging overcoming them all. Jayne observed the fragile atmosphere as he passed in and out of the continuous halls. The prison was like a time capsule, every object an ancient exhibit of what was.

Jayne continued to venture deeper into the aged penitentiary finding little evidence that there was even a way out of this ruttin’ place. Jayne could feel the odds stack against him; they weighed heavily against his chest, pinning him into one tight spot after another. Hadn’t he been through enough? What more could possibly go wrong?

And as if to answer Jayne’s sense of hopelessness, the appearance of a shuttle entrance sprang up before him as he rounded around the nearest corner. Not only was there a shuttle but there where also none of those uglies guarding it. It seems their commander had informed them of escaped prisoners and they had all been ordered to track them down. But why not leave a few men to stand guard outside of the shuttle, just in case one of those smart ruggedly good looking prisoners happen to stumble upon it? Tactically it didn’t add up to Jayne, but all he had to do was board that shuttle and freedom would be his. It was a sweet deal, maybe too sweet; it all had seemed too easy and careless.

It could be a trap? Jayne had figured as much and stayed back examining every inch of every wall, corner, nook, and crack before he approached the shuttle entrance. As Jayne neared the entrance the automatic doors coiled back, parting the way to allow Jayne to cross the threshold with ease. The metal doors retreated back to their original state, banging shut with an eerie prang that echoed from tip to tail within the tiny shuttle. Jayne wasn’t bothered by the ghostly echo of the clanging

Comments
Monday, 14 August 2006 03:05
Oh...Jayne better reach Serenity before the bomb goes off, cuz he's really gonna need Inara and Book's persuasion and help to get the rest of the crew rescued safely and Niska airated:(

Oh..and this chapter rocked mightily, WishHorse:D

BEB
Tuesday, 05 December 2006 14:53
Very good and it is so like Kaylee to not want to just save her and Wash's skin but want to get Simon out too. I suspect it is her releasing River, though she probably doesn't know who is in that cell until the door opens. Not sure how she will get the manacles off but if anyone can Kaylee can! And Simon hearing all he needs to know from the *wangba dans* holding him, that really made me feel nostalgic. Those old films where the bad guy always tells the hero his diabolical plan before killing him. Just hope Simon uses the distraction of the alarms sounding to beat the Hands of Blue into a pulp! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me

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