Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Pulling the trigger is easy; it’s the backlash that hurts. Ch.4. Unmasked

Saturday, July 1, 2006

Jayne does what he does best, kicks some butt. Zoe is hot on someone's trail. And Mal gets to see who's turning the wheels behind this whole ordeal. Sorry for the wait on chapter 4. Enjoy and feel free to comment.

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Jayne landed gracefully from his free fall or as gracefully as a man of his stature could, that is to say he landed on his feet. Jayne found himself in a small hallway that expanded into an open room which was filled with stacks and stacks of crates and boxes. It was obvious to deduce he had stumbled into some sort of a storage room.

The cargo was piled high and was in no particular order, just pushed together randomly to make room for more cargo, should it arrive. Great, Jayne had fallen from one maze, just to land himself in another ruttin’ maze. He was beginning to fell like he was being toyed with; Jayne Cobb was nobody’s damn rat.

Jayne began navigating through the cargo, pushing and pulling crates to make his own route through the dodgy course. He cautiously ventured in and out of the cargo, he had every single one of his guards up there was no telling what awaited him at the end of this maze. Jayne had know idea where he was going, a fact that he didn’t care about, lest he was walking into the hands of the enemy.

He finally came to a clearing in the storage room, probably the only place that wasn’t scattered with merchandise. Jayne leaned up against a tall stack of crates that bordered the clearing; he slowly edged to the end of the crates until he could see the area before him without being seen himself.

As Jayne rounded around the cargo he spied five men gathered around a table playing a game of tall card. Too bad Jayne didn’t have the time, he would have loved to join in their game and taken each one of those idiots money; though he’d have to settle with just taking their pride because they where about to get their asses kicked; it was inevitable.

One against five, Jayne knew he had favorable odds, he kind of felt bad for them; they where going to have to literally carry their asses back to their boss when he was done with them.

They where dressed in black suits, two of them donning silk hats, and all wearing shiny shoes. Jayne would have figured them to be

Comments
Saturday, 01 July 2006 21:08
*whimpers* I'm dying to know more about Wash and Kaylee! Loved your Jayne. I hope there is an update soon!
Sunday, 02 July 2006 12:24
Way to rack up the tension. That part where Mal is blind folded and taken to meet the boss was so full of echoes of Niska. I hope Kaylee and Wash are okay and can't wait to see Zoe and Jayne take those *tamade hundan* down and rescue everyone. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 04 July 2006 22:36
Oh...your Jayne POV was gustbusting in its hilarity, WishHorse! Especially when Jayne is disparaging their supposed lack of testicles;)

And why do I get the feeling this is gonna be another less-than-shiny meetup between Mal and Adelai Niska?

BEB

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