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Here Be Dragons (Part IX)

Saturday, May 29, 2004

In aftermath of the fighting the colonists get a reality check and the crew cleans up

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Disclaimer – Everything either does belong to Joss or it should. I’m just borrowing his shiny ‘verse for a while.

The 21st Lancers belong to the British Army so I’m borrowing them too. I hope they don’t mind.

Thanks to my regular readers for making it worthwhile to continue the story and special thanks to my Proof-Reader terribletink

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Colony Dome – Revelation – 2520AD

Mal put his hand against the airlock. ‘Seems cold enough,’ he said.

‘Should be,’ Jayne replied. ‘The holes I cut in her from outside should have put out any fires, and she’d sure cool down fast in these parts.’

‘Open her up,’ Mal ordered, and Zoe hit the airlock release. Book had already deactivated the overrides that prevented local opening and closing of the colony locks.

The thick doors slid open to a pitch black void on the other side. Air rushed in from the Dome to replace the frigid, thin gas that filled the ship. The power must have failed on the Reaver ship, which was not too surprising.

‘You sure there’s nothing alive over there Captain?’ Jayne asked, fingering his shotgun nervously.

‘River says not,’ Mal replied. ‘But keep your wits about you.’

Jayne pulled the night-vision goggles down over his eyes again and slowly made his way towards the Reaver ship with Zoe close behind, each of them against opposite sides of the airlock tunnel until Jayne finally stepped gingerly inside the ship itself.

‘This thing is a rutting mess, Sir,’ Zoe announced. ‘Looks like Steve triggered secondary explosions in here and they were hauling fuel. There’s the remains of a couple of Mules in here so I reckon it was methanol or maybe biodiesel.’

‘Atmo holding okay?’

‘Hey Cap, I did it right. Slapped a patch on the holes after smoke stopped coming out of them,’ Jayne protested.

‘No offence meant,’ Mal responded, following on behind. ‘Yeah this’ll do,’ he said, looking around at the burnt bay, ‘plenty of room.’

‘We sure this’ll work?’ Zoe asked.

‘Easiest solution I can come up with. Dump

Comments
Saturday, 29 May 2004 17:34
Loved this, and as for giving the colonists a reality check, about gorram time too! Lots of good stuff and I especially adore the way you write River. Very shiny, like the words inside a stick of rutting seaside rock it goes all the way through gorramit,
Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Saturday, 29 May 2004 17:53
I think you finally hinted at something I've been wondering for a while. As the crew gets more and more desensitized to all this killing, and they spend more time away from other people, whats to keep them from becoming just 'nothing' as the Revers are. What really separates it?

Oh well, I'm sure you'll get into that in one of the future installments.

Otherwise, shiny as always.
Sunday, 30 May 2004 12:33
Fabulous as always, Hotpoint. Wonderfully predictable character growth, the result of the continued violence. I like when you visit with each of the characters for a few lines. Were I to complain, it would only be because you don't write enough!
Sunday, 30 May 2004 14:37
As ever, Hotpoint, very entertaining and thought provoking...
‘No, I’m mostly wrong, but I try to be right,’ River replied. ‘It’s difficult for me to judge sometimes though, that’s why I obey the Captain when I’m not sure.’
‘Because he always knows what’s right and wrong?’
River shook her head. ‘No, that’s easy,’ she said. ‘It’s because he knows how to choose the least wrong.’

Shiny...Thank you, HP
Monday, 31 May 2004 08:40
There were many great lines and moments reading through that I wanted to mention in this comment, then I'd run across another, and another, excellent one (River's about the captain choosing the least wrong). My favorite, ultimately, was about Zoe: "In reality she was the psychologically toughest person here. She just needed other people to stop her soul going empty in the process." Very fine character assessment. Also enjoyed the political commentaries and abiguities--made me want to debate! Liked Book's comment about the pacifist approach the best. Thanks for sharing your writing!

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