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Comfort

Thursday, August 3, 2006

A post-Out of Gas fic. Inara's POV.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3109    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Title: Comfort

Disclaimer: It belongs to the hero of browncoats, the man we call Joss

Rating: G

Word Count: 1323

Summery: A post-Out of Gas fic.

A/N: Consider this my apology for the fact that "Over th Hills" is not going to be finished by the end of today, and y'all are gonna have to wait until I have internet access at my new apartment to read it, which... well, that could take time. Sorry!

Comfort

“…you’re all gonna be here when I wake up?”

“We’ll be here,” says Book as Mal allows himself to close his eyes. He falls asleep, surrounded by his family at last.

If Inara can call herself that. A part of his family.

The crew slowly filters out of the infirmary. First Jayne, uninterested in staying now that they are sure that Mal is on the mend. He has better things, like sleeping, to do in his bunk. Kaylee leaves next, eager to check over her engine one last time before turning in for the night. Book accompanies her, interested in seeing the captain’s handy work for himself, “with my own old eyes,” he jokes. Kaylee bursts into laughter. “You ain’t old, Shepherd,” she says as they left the room.

Inara chats idly with Wash as Simon leaves briefly to put River to bed. Inara knows that Simon doesn’t really need to do this. River is nearly a woman after all, and Inara can sense she is capable despite her traumas, capable enough to put herself to sleep anyhow, but Inara can’t blame Simon for wanting to tuck his sister in nonetheless. They have been through an ordeal, all of them. Inara can’t blame him for wanting to stick with what’s familiar and comfortable.

When Simon returns he does a quick examination of Wash and Zoe both and declares them fit to sleep in their own bunk, as long as Zoe doesn’t walk there herself. Zoe doesn’t like this, but the prospect of her own familiar bed is too great to refuse just for pride. She lets Wash and Simon carry her on a stretcher. Inara watches them go. When they are out of sight she turns to Mal. She is alone with him now for the fir

Comments
Thursday, 03 August 2006 17:11
This was a lovely little scene from Inara's pov.

I think Zoe, on some level, definitely knows that Inara has feelings for Mal.

No shock Simon doesn't see it here. He isn't real perceptive when it comes to women, after all!

Cleaning away the blood at the end seemed so natural.

Very nicely done!
Thursday, 03 August 2006 17:24
Absolutely brilliant and insightful Inara piece, if only she would show more of her real feelings when the Captain is up and about. And I disagree about Simon, I think he knows but is too polite and caring to call attention to something Inara is obviously not willing yet to share. Him going to check on River is his way of giving her a little time alone with Mal though he knows he has to return to watch over his patient and ensure he really is out of the woods. Great tale, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Thursday, 03 August 2006 18:01
I love the insight to Inara here. Her wiping up the blood in the cargo bay is very telling. She would need to wash away that reminder, especially as it would pain her everytime she saw it.

I kind of wish she had stuck to her guns though and stayed in the infirmary with Simon - or at least squeezed Mal's hand before she left. Simon would know not to say anything, to be discreet - and Inara needs to let on to her feelings.

Of course, we know she doesn't, but it's nice to dream! *sigh*

Great stuff, write some more, please.
Thursday, 03 August 2006 20:22
Let that fool wash his own blood off the gorram floor!!!!

Just kidding. That fact that she does it speaks volumes.
Friday, 04 August 2006 06:38
Loved this one. I've read a lot of post Out of Gas fics, but none Inara, and this one is exceptional.
Sunday, 06 August 2006 03:34
Bribing us with one-shots, huh? Must say...you know how to grease the wheels right;)

Definitely a brilliant and telling look into Inara's psyche post-OoG and pre-HoG...though I like to think Simon's a bit more perceptive when it comes to things not related to his own interactions with women;D

Oh...and if the need to grease some palms comes up again? I think you'll find some decent reception 'round here:D

BEB
Sunday, 06 August 2006 14:49
Very nice Arcadia! Inara and Mal are so alike some times it's scary. Bith bottling up their feelings. Not letting anything show.
Monday, 07 August 2006 03:54
very lovely piece. i tend to think everyone on serenity knows about mal's feelings for inara and probably vice versa. simon is braindead when it comes to kaylee, but otherwise he's smart and quiet--the type who tends to observe. so i'm guessing he's aware of inara's feelings on some level. but anyway, i love inara's restlessness here, wandering the ship as mal so often does. very pretty! thanks~

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