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CHECK MATE: Red Queen to Black Rook. (10/22)

Wednesday, May 19, 2004

The time has come for Inara to carry out her mission. Wash gets drunk and Mal gets into trouble. Jayne tries to smooth things over.

This chapter has a little sex and a little gore. Don't read it if that would bother you.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3678    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Disclaimer: Joss Whedon created these characters. Love him.

PG-13, I think.

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CHECKMATE: Red queen to black rook.

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Inara is beginning to show. There's an undeniable curve to her belly and a ripe heaviness to her breasts. Given her line of work, some men might question their part in such a development. But Mal doesn't. Not even for a second. He knows this child is his.

For some reason she's wearing a pair of Kaylee's old overalls this morning and there's not a scrap of makeup on her perfect face. To Mal she's never been more beautiful. Her hair falls forward as she leans over the sink, sunlight picking out strands of copper and red. In the distance he can hear birdsong.

He comes up behind her, sliding both hands round her waist and then forwards and down over her hip bones. A thrill goes through him as she gives a little gasp of anticipation. Her whole body seems to melt under his hands and for a moment he allows himself to delight in the intensity of her response to his touch. He always dreams it will be like this.

She leans back against him, letting his shoulder cushion her head. The weight on his collar bone has an overwhelming rightness to it. With one hand he gently pushes her head forward, lifting the hair from her neck so that he can feather the nape with light kisses and as he fans out the fingers of his other hand to push her hard up against him, he feels the flesh beneath his hand tighten as deeper muscles flutter and contract. Inara's breathing quickens and her pelvis tilts up to meet his fingers.

“Oh God, Inara,” he moans, hard and aching for her. “I want....”

She twists round in his arms so that they are face to face. There's no Guild-trained artifice in the look she gives him. Only need, desire and love. She reaches up to twist his hair around her fingers and pulls him down into a long hungry kiss that instead of satisfying leaves them even more ravenous for each other.

“I want you to bed me, Mal,” she says, her voice ragged with passion.

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 19 May 2004 16:29
Ai-carramba, what a place to leave us hanging! Nice interplay with the events of Ariel, could almost see the gears turning while Jayne puzzled out what to do - and just WTH is going on, anyway? Also, kinda hot - not the squicky end part, of course, but before that - whoo. I loves me some M/I. Looking forward to the next part. HurrySundown
Wednesday, 19 May 2004 18:29
The setup has been riveting, and now the action keeps up. Can't wait for what's next!
Wednesday, 19 May 2004 18:53
Wow... totally shiny I liked this just about every way possible!

"He became a Shepherd because once he was a wolf"--great line and imagery. Jayne's quick assessment and action, good on him! The Mal & Zoe scenes with Wash's reactions... all excellent.

Thanks for a great read!
Wednesday, 19 May 2004 19:43
Another great chapter in an interesting story -- I loved Wash's drunken ramblings. Next, please!
Wednesday, 19 May 2004 23:58
This is so very shiny it almost dazzles me! Love it all, wish I could do something suitably nasty and very painful to Badger. And Wash is a hero? Does this mean they'll go to a planet where he is the hero? Can't wait to see what happens next, thanks for a great story and lovely characterisations. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Thursday, 20 May 2004 03:39
Kispexi2,

Wow, Wow, wow, wow! Hot damn was that great. I love how you write Inara! And the Mal/Inara dream sequences *sighs*...great imagery throughout the whole story. I'm enjoying the twist with Wash and havin' Jayne discover Inara out. Excellent use of foreshadowing...and yes, Mal is too pretty. *grin* I can't wait for the next chapter--story has great pace!

Bravo, Bravo!
Cassie E
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 21 May 2004 16:27
This is so realistic. I cant beleive how well the characters are written. If only i could do that...oh well carry on please
I LOVE Wash and so glad this story is half about him....yay thanks you've made my day

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