Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

The Operative: Part 3, Into The Black

Wednesday, July 12, 2006

Part 3 of my Operative fic. The mysterious person known only as 'The Operative' has an appointment with his superior. Who knew just 4 words could change his whole world?

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Any feedback welcomed. To get it, you'll have to read the first two.

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“Identity: recognised. Entry: permitted.” The vaguely female computerised voice said blandly as the silver door slid into the walls with a small hiss.

The operative took a deep breath, and made himself enter the cold, metallic room. The woman behind the desk glared at him, as if challenging his right to be there.

“Yes?”

“I’m here to see the Elite General Operative.”

“Do you have an appointment?”

“Yes”

“Rank and Number.” She knew better than to ask for his name. Anyone who came to see her superior would not have one.

“Advanced Operative 3988AT”

“Right.” Business-like, she put one finger to the small metal sphere in her ear. There was a moment of awkward silence as she listened to it. “The General will see you now.”

Thankful to get away from the eerie, empty waiting room and the faint, vaguely irritating music drifting in from an invisible source, the Operative strode through the large silver doors, pushing his fear and anxiety deep down inside.

He stopped short at the sight of the man who sat behind the desk, the only piece of furniture in the room. He was huge. Muscles rippled under his tunic, and the chair barely stood under his solid weight, He was old, too, though he didn’t look it. Only the creases round his eyes and the few white hairs, which sprouted from his baldhead, belied his age.

“3988AT. I understand you wanted to see me.” His voice was deep and gravelly, emanating power and authority.

The Operative bowed respectively, fighting a mental battle with the part of himself that wanted to ask dutifully for his next assignment. “Yes, Sir.” He took another deep breath, steeling himself for the words that would turn his world upside down. “I wish to retire.”

The General’s expression did not waver. “Very well, you will be subjected to memory suppression. Do you still wish to retire?”

The Operative nodded, not trusting himself to speak. Once an Operative decided to retire, they had to underg

Comments
Wednesday, 12 July 2006 15:43
I love this series! Book was definitly an operative, please continue with the series. I gotta know how Book gets his memory back, and also about his life at the Abbey.
Friday, 14 July 2006 05:52
Ya know...for a moment there, I actually thought it was the BDM Operative:$

Still...now I wanna know (too) how the man who will be called Derrial Book comes to recall his memories...an encounter with the man he was sent to eliminate in the first place perhaps?

BEB

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