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Brain for a Day - part 5 of 5 (teleplay format)
Tuesday, May 30, 2006
River's newfound sanity is in jeopardy. Will Simon and the crew be able to save her or is she doomed to be locked inside her own head?
CATEGORY: FICTION TIMES READ: 2469 RATING: 9.0 (PG13) SERIES: FIREFLY
Comments
Tuesday, 30 May 2006 20:08
Yup, liked it. A lot. You're funny and fun to read. You wrote a good story and kept the dialogue authentic and clever. Thank you.
Tuesday, 30 May 2006 20:08
aww. sad but nice.... and jayne always the mercenary, nothings free...
Wednesday, 31 May 2006 05:38
Uh...sequel....now....please...before people get grumpy;)
Loved this series, LFabry! And ending...oh the angst!
But what was with Simon handing over money to Jayne? Discerning people wanna know!
BEB
Loved this series, LFabry! And ending...oh the angst!
But what was with Simon handing over money to Jayne? Discerning people wanna know!
BEB
Wednesday, 31 May 2006 08:14
"But what was with Simon handing over money to Jayne?"
Simon was paying for Jayne's face paints with which River was painting a colorful landscape.
Simon was paying for Jayne's face paints with which River was painting a colorful landscape.
Wednesday, 31 May 2006 18:54
If I were a guy and it were 500 years from now, I'd be just like Jayne. But cleaner.
Friday, 02 June 2006 22:06
All right...who is that above me? Anonymous 71.31. whatever? Come on! Reveal yourself! And if dustbunny should read this, holler at me cuz I'm having trouble finding you
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