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Seeing The Light

Tuesday, May 30, 2006

Fluffy Jaylee snippet.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3081    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Summary: Jaylee snippet, post-BDM. Could be taken as a follow-up to ‘A Lasting Impression’.

Disclaimer: Joss created Serenity. Serenity belongs to Mal. Mal recruited Kaylee. Kaylee belongs with Jayne. Jayne is brought to life by Adam and occasionally pops up in my dreams. It’s one big happy family, really.

SEEING THE LIGHT

Kaylee couldn’t recall exactly when she’d stopped watching Jayne.

It was a pity, really, because he was just so damned watchable. She’d used to do it all the time when he first came aboard. It’d been somewhat of a hobby of hers, just watching him and setting herself adrift in lazy daydreams of his strong arms and rippling muscles, of his big careful hands. Sure, the Captain had warned her off getting involved, she suspected he’d warned Jayne too, but that didn’t stop a gal from looking her fill. He’d been new and interesting, and there was always some mighty fine scenery on show.

Then along came Doctor Simon Tam, and his bright-hot Core-boy shine had eclipsed Jayne’s steady warm glow. Like a moth with a flame, she’d burned herself over and over trying to get close to that light, the big mercenary reduced to naught but a shadow on the edge of her vision. She hadn’t really looked at him anymore, not without the flash burst of Simon blinding her to his presence.

Then came Miranda, and everything changed.

Somewhere amidst all the trouble, Simon finally saw her, finally wanted to be with her. The problem was, after being so wrapped up in the chase for all those months, the reality of actually having him within her grasp was pretty much an anti-climax. Not to mention awkward. They hadn’t quite fit the way she’d thought they would.

Wasn’t anyone’s fault really; they were just geared too different. Outside from the sexin’, they didn’t share a whole lot of common ground. Simon never wanted to talk with her much, not about anything serious leastways, and not without being all manner of snooty. He weren’t one

Comments
Tuesday, 30 May 2006 13:57
I love it! What a great read before bedtime!

The changes in Jayne since Miranda are real plausible and I'm glad it was Kaylee who noticed.

I love River's insights into the relationship and the Captain's piloting skills!
Tuesday, 30 May 2006 19:22
"Jayne was on her before she could blink, right up against her, toe-to-toe, so close she could feel the heat from his body all the way along her front, stealing the breath from her lungs. He waited until she raised her chin, toffee-coloured eyes makin’ the long journey upward to meet the molten steel of his."

This was damn sexy and showed Jayne's passion and feeling for Kaylee - good writing. Any more...please!!!
Tuesday, 30 May 2006 23:55
Loving the Jaylee fluff! Keep it up!
Wednesday, 31 May 2006 00:34
nice
Wednesday, 31 May 2006 09:56
That was shiny. The last line unexpectedly brought tears to my eyes. Will there be more?
Wednesday, 12 July 2006 16:16
How the heck did I miss this one?

Well, no matter, it was absolutely lovely!

This was wonderful, poetical, you might say: Then along came Doctor Simon Tam, and his bright-hot Core-boy shine had eclipsed Jayne’s steady warm glow. Like a moth with a flame, she’d burned herself over and over trying to get close to that light, the big mercenary reduced to naught but a shadow on the edge of her vision. She hadn’t really looked at him anymore, not without the flash burst of Simon blinding her to his presence.

:)
Thursday, 13 July 2006 06:03
I think I read this before, but I can't figure out why I didn't post!

Excellent read - I completely understand the let down after the chase! Very common experience, I think...

great jaylee read!
Thursday, 10 August 2006 10:39
Shiny! Totally likely and love River's comments especially "Simons a boob!"
So true, he's not enough man for Kaylee, she needs Jayne!

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