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EMPTY SPACES

Wednesday, May 17, 2006

This is my first and I don't usually write filks.

CATEGORY: FILK    TIMES READ: 2121    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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A flame flickered

Dancing and twisting

Briefly only for a second

A glimmer of hope

Then darkness

The whispering winds

Came and scared it away

Coldness

Sorrow filled the space

The floodwaters rise

Drowning all in its way

Sadness

Comments
Wednesday, 17 May 2006 07:27
this is very nice. expressive.
Tuesday, 23 May 2006 03:49
Very good Jorja, for your first!

Short and to the point!
Thursday, 15 June 2006 04:46
That was me.

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