Lookin' for beta readers.
POSTED BY: Cybersnark
UPDATED: Sunday, April 10, 2005 23:46
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Howdé
Back in January, Aramina got some folks to critique a chunk of novel around here, so I thought I'd try something similar.
Got a (dark, mildly Angel-esque) fantasy short story (about 10,000 wds), and I wondered if anyone would be willing to beta-read before I send it out. I'm worried that the ending may be a bit dark (don't want to be upbeat, 'cause happy endings are clichéed, but don't wanna be too dark 'cause I'll depress the editors and they won't buy it
). I figure, since Firefly(/Buffy/Angel) fans are such a discriminating and artistically critical lot, I'd look here.
Lemme know if anyone's interested and I'll email it.
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We applied the cortical electrodes but were unable to get a neural reaction from either patient.
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Heck, I'd be happy to read it for you. Problem is, I'm rather new here, so I'm not sure how to go about giving you my e-mail address without letting the world see it.
Also, I love a good dark ending.
"Invader's blood marches through my veins like giant radioactive rubber pants. The pants command me! Do not ignore my veins!"
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The way you'd go about sending him your email is click on his screen name. That'll take you to his personal info, and on the left hand side is a place to send him a message.
Good luck! Oh, and let me know if the stoy is any good, becasue if it sucks, I'm not gonna buy it. :big grin: 
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Hey, Ath, have you tried to reach me? I ask 'cause I've had experience of Cyberus auto-kilfiling people for no apparent reason.
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We applied the cortical electrodes but were unable to get a neural reaction from either patient.
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