River Vid: "Scared"
POSTED BY: Steamer
UPDATED: Wednesday, December 6, 2006 05:09
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In which River looks to Simon and Mal to help her cope with her fears.
http://www.marimba26.com/Firefly/River.html
Them as already saw this vid have all hailed it as my best one yet. You're more than welcome to your own judgment, but one way or the other, I would LOOOOOVE some feedback. 
River grabbed
The gun and
Dropped three
"No power
In the 'verse
Can stop me!"
FIREFLY
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I really liked it. The clips you chose worked good, and it really 'flowed' together.
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//breathe today So many lies s w i r l i n g
All A R O U N D You
you're S U F F O C A T I N G
the e m p t y shape in Y O U
s t e a l s your b r e a t h
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Not bad.
As a constructive critisism, I wouldn't have put the needle scene nor the "River in the box" scene at the end. I would have left the ending with only more "up beat" scenes like all the others that you chose.
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I am on The List. We are The Forsaken and we aim to burn!
"We don't fear the reaper"
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