Winds Gather

POSTED BY: Stormwind
UPDATED: Tuesday, January 2, 2007 21:28
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STORMWIND

Tuesday, December 19, 2006 10:50 AM

Dude Jeremiah is Seventeen! See Below

MAZAEN

Tuesday, December 19, 2006 11:40 AM

Is season 2 going to be a prequel or sequel to the movie Serenity?

Jeremiah sounds like an interesting character. He has the opportunity to shed some light on Kaylee.

Another idea for a story could be a story about the mysterious side of Innara. Innara was a bit mysterious in season 1. She was mysterious when Serenity was near Revers and she picked up and considered eating a tablet.

The other day, I was walking past an electrical appliance store and I got a bit of a shock when I saw a sign saying Revers in the window. I for a second imagined that anyone could walk into the store and buy Revers. I looked again and the sign actually said reverse as in reverse cycle airconditioning.

STORMWIND

Friday, December 22, 2006 9:52 PM

Here's the eight episode descriptions I've done so far. This is where I really need help to get more ideas because i'm a little fresh out right now. Apart from this- working on a pilot/telemovie idea that could perhaps be ep 1. This involves the Zoe stuff from above as well as good old realible Alliance reprisals against the crew. Also show the 'Verse's reaction to Miranda.

But here's what i've really got.
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1. Jayne and River get snatched by slavers and Mal is forced to enlist Alliance help to save them.

2.Kaylee recieves a letter from her parents asking for help and in answering it the crew find their new pilot-Jeremiah Frye.

3. An encounter with Serenity's ex-mechanic leads to an all out war between the two ships.

4.An Alliance captain hires (blackmails?) the crew to steal the ship of a rival n order to discredit him, but when the job goes sour the crew is forced to switch alliegences.

5. The story of Sheperd Book as told by the Guardian who was involved in the realse of River.(see my Blog for more info)

6.While visiting a remote moon the crew discover posters which read 'Inara Serra. Wanted for Murder and Adultery.' While Mal attempts to unravel what realy happened there is still a job to be carried out.

7. A rich man hires the crew to rescue his kidnapped daughter but but complications arise whe she does not want to be rescued.

8.With the rest of the crew away from Serenity, Simon and Kaylle find themselves alone together. However a mysterius visitor is all set to ruin their day.

Well my days of takin' you seriously are certainly comin' to a middle.

BRYONSBOAS

Tuesday, January 2, 2007 5:04 AM

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Originally posted by Stormwind:
Hey guys thanks for stuff.

Here's an episode synopsis as well as my OC characther.

WORKING TITLES (please pick which one is best or give me a better one.) 'Dust' 'Family Ties' 'Mean Old Boy'

PLOT/STORY-The crew travel to Esara (Where they try to sell the Lassiter-It reminds me of Mos Eisly from Star Wars-albeit more hub of the 'verse like.) to find a new pilot (having deemed River unstable) but while there they recieve a letter from Kaylee's parents asking for help. They leave without hiring anyone new and go to Kaylee's homeworld where they meet Kaylee's parents. Kaylee's previously unemployed father has had good times, acquiring a ranch, (perhaps in dice game or as an inheratence?) and becoming a reasonably respectable man. However their son, and Kaylee's younger brother Jeremiah has an overly big mouth and a criminal mind continuely stealing visiting spaceships and taking them for joy rides and getting into fights. However he recently slighted the wrong man-a local crime boss-making him look like a fool and now the crime boss i intent on taking revenge on his family. Together with the local sherrif (Kaylee's uncle) and his men mal and the crew gather and fight off the gang. Impressed with Jeremiah, Mal takes him off the hands of the Frye's and into the crew as the-pilot in training.

COOL SCENES-Mal being delighted at being on a ranch like the one he grew up on. Kaylee's mother mothering Jayne. The Frye famil all together. Simon being introduced to Kaylee's family and they being less than impressed. Jeremiah meeting River for the first time. Jeremiah uniting Jayne and Simon in dislike. Mal, Zoe and Jayne being made temporary gvernment deputies much to everyone's amusement.

Anyway I really like this episode playing as it does on the themes of Family and Sticking Together. Oh and Crime.

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Well my days of takin' you seriously are certainly comin' to a middle.

Since its a family get together shouldn't there be some scenes of Zoe near falling apart or feeling " lost / left out " due to the loss of Wash and any possibility of a family she wanted with Wash?

Bryon

STORMWIND

Tuesday, January 2, 2007 6:36 AM

Yeah thanks for bringing that to my attention, man. I tend to almost forget Zoe on purpose cos I find her really hard to write for.
But you are dead right-Seeing a family happy and together would tear her apart.
That is if she hasn't kinda learnt to deal with it by this stage. A work in progress idea that has been thrown around is Zoe meeting with Wash's family in a telemovie/pilot thing where she would expel a lot of grief.

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Well my days of takin' you seriously are certainly comin' to a middle.

BRYONSBOAS

Tuesday, January 2, 2007 9:18 PM

I'm going along the lines of the arguement Zoe had with Wash in " Heart of Gold " about wanting a baby.
Even if this episode were to take place after meeting Wash's parents there would still be a twinge of pain and regret for not being able to meet that " beautiful baby " that her and Wash would create.
If it was nothing more than flashbacks to the arguements with Wash and her ( over the baby ), going quiet at that moment, long pause of her starting to break then having to excuse herself.Probably somewhere around Kaylee's mom mothering her as Zoe watches. As stoic as Zoe is , a slight hint of a tear at the memories would work. Someone , probably Mal since he knows her best and she trusts him , could come to her outside as she sits with her head down. A " human " moment with Zoe and Mal about the pain she feels for not having the chance at the baby , maybe a little anger at herself for not pushing it and a little anger at Wash for being bullheaded about it.

Just an idea. It can revolve around the baby meaning more to her than folks thought. Could even take a few episodes for it to finally come to light.

Bryon Adzic

JLIN13

Tuesday, January 2, 2007 9:28 PM

not sure if anyone would like this too much but.... Kaylee's brother for say the season finale(yeah im going a little too far ahead) but maybe they hit the outer rim planets and Jeremiah sees the emptiness in the space and he starts to act not right which could possibly head to him becoming a reaver. it just popped into my head so i havent thought it through entirely

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