Talk Story

NaiLThat BastarD to The WaLL

POSTED BY: RiveR6213
UPDATED: Friday, May 26, 2006 20:47
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KPO
Wednesday, May 24, 2006 4:53 AM

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she gets drowsy and falls asleep


...which was just the moment that sweetserendipity was waiting for - she emerges from the shadowy hallway and steals across the room until she stands over the slouched figure of River6213. The face of her unsuspecting victim is peaceful, adorned with crumbs, milk moustache and a satisfied smile. The hands are red with the blood of the day's indiscriminate killings. Sweetserendipity is consumed with rage:
"That tuna fish was my brother. He shall be avenged."
She silently raises one fin and prepares to strike...




...River’s dream started out pleasant enough with the unremembered, long dark fall towards the swirling oblivion called sleep, but then it transformed into a collage of disturbing images of places she’s never been, and people she’s never met. The constant whispering of voices; of secrets in the back ground made the fall all the more certain and final. The anger and confusion of hot and cold; the murky faces of withered old men with blue hands with eyes that held no warmth. The white frocked doctors with the needles and cold manners...

River wakes with a start, and instinctively rolls to the left off the couch and onto the carpet as the dark shape that was standing over her comes down and buries itself into the couch with a heavy noise that clearly says to River that this thing, whatever it is, is heavy. The television is still going on in the background as River jumps to her feet, but before she could take another step, the shape strikes her so hard, that River is thrown through the plate-glass window of her living room where she lands on a dew wet yard, the back of her head fetching up against the wooden fence. The creature dives through the broken window after River making strange, carnal-like noises that River is certain that she doesnt like, and lands right on her…



...and much grappling ensues.

A stranger rushes to the scene, alerted by the loud squelching noises. It is KPO. He lifts his sunglasses off his eyes and stands, taking a second to take in the slimy spectacle before him - fish grappling woman, woman grappling fish...

"Huh" He says, and pulls up a chair.

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Wednesday, May 24, 2006 5:31 AM

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Wednesday, May 24, 2006 2:22 PM

" the creature has been reduced to a red, meaty mass on the floor."

Awww crap! I've been reduced to a meaty mass! Oh well, the Forsaken shall revenge me and mine!

Deb
Serendipityagain.com

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Wednesday, May 24, 2006 4:13 PM

Yeah, Seryn, I have no idea what her problem is. I like the concept of the Melodrama Exclusion Zone...I usually call mine the "yeah, ok, piss off" zone. I may have to borrow the MEZ from you.


Sometimes people need attention, and this is the only way they know to get it...

Holding until you get back, Captain.

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Wednesday, May 24, 2006 5:00 PM

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She killed Tristan and FMF?!?!?! (FMF?)






Worry not for FMF darling one, I do not have an MEZ (although methinks me needs one) but I am protected by the mighty furtureMR. Mine is a hearty laugh BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA



I am on The List. We are The Forsaken and we aim to burn!
"We don't fear the reaper"

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Wednesday, May 24, 2006 5:26 PM

Well this thread IS in the Talk Story area so I think what she's doing fits here. It's rather amusing.


“I don’t know. This here’s a spectacle might warrant a moment’s consideration.”

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Wednesday, May 24, 2006 6:19 PM

I like the way she writes her stories. I'm going to have to write a few talk stories of my own and get people involved in them. There are talk stories going on in this section, but its strange that those ladies claim River6423 is looking for attention when the same kind of talk stories are going on in other threads in this section of the forum. She does seem like she has a lot of rage though.

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Wednesday, May 24, 2006 6:28 PM

who claims that she is looking for attention? Did I miss something?

I am on The List. We are The Forsaken and we aim to burn!
"We don't fear the reaper"

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Wednesday, May 24, 2006 6:46 PM

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Wednesday, May 24, 2006 7:09 PM

Usually though, the talk/story thread stays in one place. River6213 is jumping from thread to thread killing people...still don't know why even though I'm dead. And now there's a give River a hug thread, check it out.

Deb
Serendipityagain.com

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