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Horse, Foot and Artillery Fanfic

POSTED BY: Hotpoint
UPDATED: Wednesday, August 2, 2006 17:58
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Sunday, March 26, 2006 5:45 PM

Part XVIII of the 'Horse, Foot and Artillery' Sequence now posted

Any thoughts? Any opinions? Any critiques?... is there anybody out there?

Class warfare?



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Hurrah, hurrah, when things are at their worst
With cries of “Death or Glory” comes the mighty Twenty-First

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Wednesday, May 10, 2006 9:33 AM

More, been following this story since you started it. You just got to finish, not sure i can wait much longer before i hire Jayne to track you down and convince you to write more.

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Friday, May 12, 2006 12:22 PM

Mate your stories are top notch!!!

Keep writing!

I've made a few comments at the end of your last part.

Here's how it might of been http://www.stillflying.net/

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Friday, May 12, 2006 12:32 PM

I have no idea if you got my PMs (I don’t really know if they work) But Id thought Id through a slight dampener on your writing that the Death or Glory cap badge (or motto as its known in the regiment) originated from the 17th Lancers not the 21st Sorry. The two amalgamated in 1922 and later became the Queens Royal Lancers of today.

http://www.regiments.org/regiments/uk/cav/D17b(L).htm

http://www.army.mod.uk/qrl/regimental_badge.htm

But apart from this small fact and that it slightly goes against the grain to hear a British Calvary regiment use terms like 'Battalion' and 'Platoon' .....

Your writing is amoung the best on the site!

Keep writing Trooper Hotpoint!

Here's how it might of been http://www.stillflying.net/

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Friday, May 12, 2006 12:32 PM

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Sunday, June 4, 2006 8:46 PM

Part XIX of the 'Horse, Foot and Artillery' Sequence now posted

Any thoughts? Any opinions? Any critiques?... is there anybody out there?

'Well what did you expect when you were dealing with a Lancer?'



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Hurrah, hurrah, when things are at their worst
With cries of “Death or Glory” comes the mighty Twenty-First

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Sunday, June 4, 2006 8:55 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by WishuponaWash:
I have no idea if you got my PMs (I don’t really know if they work) But Id thought Id through a slight dampener on your writing that the Death or Glory cap badge (or motto as its known in the regiment) originated from the 17th Lancers not the 21st Sorry. The two amalgamated in 1922 and later became the Queens Royal Lancers of today.



I actually do know this. I choose the 21st rather than the 17th because they were the Regiment that rode at Omdurman (the last great cavalry charge of the British Army) and as you say the 17th/21st did wear the "Motto".

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Originally posted by WishuponaWash:

But apart from this small fact and that it slightly goes against the grain to hear a British Calvary regiment use terms like 'Battalion' and 'Platoon' .....



It's not really a "British" Regiment though as much as a 26th Century Independent Colonies one and I never intended it to be organised like a contemporary unit. The mixture of British and American terms is meant to go with the mixing of cultures that is so obvious in the show.

I'd think that some of my historical asides within the text would have shown I do know a bit of military history myself. It's not poor research honestly!

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Originally posted by WishuponaWash:
Your writing is amoung the best on the site!



Given the quality of many of the authors here that is high praise indeed. Thankyou

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Originally posted by WishuponaWash:

Keep writing Trooper Hotpoint!



I do when I can (lousy rotten real life interfering )


...................................
Hurrah, hurrah, when things are at their worst
With cries of “Death or Glory” comes the mighty Twenty-First

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Sunday, June 4, 2006 9:16 PM

It's about time. Worth the wait. Looking forward to more battles.

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One army of Browncoats.

On June 23rd, we aim to misbehave!
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Monday, June 5, 2006 1:27 PM

Well I did think that it may of just been a lack of looking at the details, since a everything else was so detailed.

As for the mixing of regiments and cultures..... well yes you do have a point there.

Can I put in a request for somekind of ORBAT for the 21st and the 57th, as well as the Independent Army overall.

Here's how it might of been www.stillflying.net/

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Monday, June 5, 2006 5:43 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by WishuponaWash:
Can I put in a request for somekind of ORBAT for the 21st and the 57th, as well as the Independent Army overall.



Okay very roughly:

For the 21st (and other Independent Cavalry Regiments) the fighting strength under the 2522 reorganisation would be

Headquarters Company/Squadron*
3 Armoured Cavalry Battalions

Each Battalion consists of three Companies/Squadrons

Each Company/Squadron is made up of 3 Platoons/Troops* (which themselves consist of 3 Squads)

Squad = 3 Excalibur AFV
Troop/Platoon = 3 Squads (9 AFV total)
Squadron/Company = 3 Troops (27 AFV total)
Battalion = 3 Squadrons/Companies (81 AFV total)
Regiment = 3 Battalions + Headquarters Company (270 AFV total)

Three crew per Excalibur = fighting strength of 810 officers and other ranks

In addition there are other personnel attached in a support role (mechanics/armourers/medics/engineers) plus the crews of the Transport ships pushing the total manpower of an Armoured Regiment well above 1200.


*The names are used interchangably. Some Regiments and/or individual Cavalrymen prefer Squadron/Troop others Company/Platoon

Under the 2522 NMA (New Model Army) combined-arms reorganisation a Cavalry Regiment usually fights alongside two Mechanised Infantry/Panzer Grenadier Regiments plus an Artillery Regiment (self-propelled) as part of a Heavy Armoured Brigade. The Brigade may be split into three Battlegroups of mixed Cavalry, Infantry and Artillery if required. (Horse, Foot and Artillery )

... and I'll let you find out the rest when I get around to writing a few more chapters


...................................
Hurrah, hurrah, when things are at their worst
With cries of “Death or Glory” comes the mighty Twenty-First

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