Firefly in Haiku
POSTED BY: zorprime01
UPDATED: Friday, March 10, 2006 05:53
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the ones that take you
the ones reaching and doing
the ones ... everywhere
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RIVER
I see them reach out
the hands of blue, two by two
rubbery meddle
BOOK
not with extenders
have I seen a ship like this
worth how I got here
BIG SHIP
Fireflies have nooks
for hiding grade A foodstuffs
for hiding big faith
SerenityShadow
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"Jayne, you wanta leave this table...." Mal
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Dave... those aren't Haikus. It's 5-7-5.
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Quote:
Originally posted by mattcoz:
... those aren't Haikus. It's 5-7-5.
Sometimes counting is hard.
S'posed to contain reference to seasons too, but what if there's not really any seasons where you live? I made this one about Los Angeles:
Morning gridlock. All
My options involve waiting
For others to move.
...so, what's L.A. got to do with Firefly? um,
"You live in a spaceship, dear."
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"Jayne, you wanta leave this table...." Mal
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Quote:That's 6
Originally posted by davec5:
i am not japanese
You didn't learn Haiku in school? I thought everybody learned Haiku.
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"Jayne, you wanta leave this table...." Mal
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For Serenity:
Nine souls in constant limbo
Find themselves in you.
--
They're grenades, Cap'n.
What, you don't want to take them?
Hey, I warned you, man.
--
Leather over heart
Vulnerability there
Armor versus leaf
--
Crazy? Broken brain?
I've felt enough to know I've
Felt too gorram much.
--
Sensory creature
Not just an ox with a gun
I'll be in my bunk.
Heh, these are fun! Mine aren't terribly good, but they do make a fella think, don't they?
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