'Dead or Alive' Act III is up!

POSTED BY: Haken
UPDATED: Saturday, May 10, 2003 04:37
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HAKEN

Friday, May 9, 2003 11:40 PM

I apologize for the delay. Been a busy day with another project I'm working on.
Now, go read.

MOOSE

Saturday, May 10, 2003 12:38 AM

Thanks!

KAYTHRYN

Saturday, May 10, 2003 12:46 AM

What a great script. I just wish it had made it long enough to be filmed. *Insert cry icon here*

Thanks ten times over Haken! <-- I know you’re probably sick of getting kissed, but I can’t help it.

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It is the mark of an educated mind to be able to entertain a thought without accepting it.
Aristotle

SHINY

Saturday, May 10, 2003 12:50 AM

Thanks Haken!

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Simon should 'accidentally' slip while re-attaching one of Tanaka's arteries...

TALRIUS

Saturday, May 10, 2003 1:21 AM

Thanks Haken.

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That scene with Jayne and Kaylee about the stuffed turtle was great. So was the scene with River telling the story.

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DOBSON: I'm supposed to be meeting my wife's sister. I've only got a few days to see her...

ZOE: I wish there was another way...

DOBSON: Oh, no, no. That woman is like a dragon. I mean, I believe she has a tail. If there's any other moons we need to visit, or if we could just
fly very slowly...

GINOBIFFARONI

Saturday, May 10, 2003 4:37 AM

The Simon / Tanaka part of this story
reminds me alot of The Barber of Seville,

It has been years since I read it,

It was set during the Spanish civil war, a general goes into a barber shop for a shave, you know with the barber using a straight razor.
Little does the General know he is responsible for the deaths of the barbers family.
The Barber shaves him, his sharp blade touching the generals throat. He thinks about it.
He finishes, gets paid.
As the general was leaving the barber pulls out a shotgun and blows the general in half.

It would have been unprofessional to cut the generals throat while shaving him, blowing him in half with a shotgun was more honorable in his mind.

The imagery was fantastic