excerpt from SERENITY novelization is now up!
POSTED BY: KRAD
UPDATED: Thursday, August 11, 2005 19:54
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Chapter 1 of my novelization of Serenity is now available at Simon & Schuster's web site. Go check it out! 
http://www.simonsays.com/subs/excerpt.cfm?areaid=288&isbn=1416507558
Keith R.A. DeCandido
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That is FANTASTIC - a brilliant choice for an opening scene (note to people who haven't seen the movie yet - this whole chapter isn't in Serenity. At least, not the movie.) I love the language, and I particularly love Zoe's introduction.
By the way, I just finished reading Articles of the Federation, which was also fantastic. One of the best Star Trek books I've read. I can't wait for the rest of this novelization :)
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Thanks very much!
Keith R.A. DeCandido
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I like it, KRAD. I'm looking forward to reading the whole thing come September.
MAL "You only gotta scare him."
JAYNE "Pain is scary..."
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Quote:
(note to people who haven't seen the movie yet - this whole chapter isn't in Serenity. At least, not the movie.)
Thanks for saying that! I probably would've passed the link up for fear of spoilers.
And thanks to the author for letting us know it was there!
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That is just wonderful, KRAD!
I can't wait to read the rest of it!!!!
Thanks!
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Very well done, Krad.
PIE!
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Fantastic, Krad! I ordered my copy months ago - looking forward to it! I'm really glad you've been given permission to move that much into your own interpretations of things that aren't completely covered in the show - I must admit I was worried about a novelization, but I'm not anymore :)
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HEre it is---------------------------------------
SERENITY VALLEY, HERA
Sergeant Malcolm Reynolds's life had reduced itself to the critical imperative of running.
He pumped his legs as fast as he could through the uneven ground of Serenity Valley, his boots slamming down onto the rocks and dirt. With a determination born of faith and righteousness, he ignored the aching muscles, the fingers that desperately wanted to relinquish their grip on his weapon, and the bodies of so many of his fellow soldiers as he dashed back to base camp. Not to mention the mortar fire lighting up the night sky all around him.
"Base camp" was probably a more highfalutin name than the pile of sandbags in the dirt deserved, but that was what they had. The tattered remains of the Independent defense was headquartered there.
For five weeks, they had held the valley. Serenity Valley was the key to Hera, and Hera was the key to the war. Whoever controlled this particular ball of rock would be in position to do considerable damage to the other side.
Doing damage was a notion Mal Reynolds could surely get behind.
He stumbled up the incline that led to base camp, throwing his arms down at the last minute to cushion the impact as his body hit the ground. That, he thought, could've been ugly. Might've split my lip or something.
It was a weak joke, but such were powerful funny when you were watching Alliance aircraft mow down platoon after platoon after platoon.
To some extent, Mal was flattered by the attention. The Alliance calling in air support meant that they took the Browncoats' defense of Serenity Valley seriously -- something they probably commenced to doing after a month had passed without the Alliance taking Serenity in twenty-four hours like they planned.
So they sent in more troops. And more air support.
As Mal watched, an Alliance skiff took down dozens of his people, plowing through bodies like knives.
Stumbling into base camp, he wondered where the hell their own air support was. The Alliance had been too clever by half, and made sure to target officers instead of grunts. Mal wasn't all sure, but it seemed fair to certain that he was the highest-ranking Brown-coat left in this gorram valley.
And still we're holding it. He smiled. These Alliance folk were getting a hard lesson in the power of positive thinking -- in this case, the people were positive they didn't need some government completely taking over their lives. The Alliance was welcome to the central planets, but keep your grubby mitts off our outer worlds, thank you so much. Once our air support shows up, then you'll really see what we can do. Until then, though, that Alliance skiff out there was not going to let up until all the Browncoats were dead.
He went straight for the corporal whose name
he could not remember, but who he called "Grin"
on account of how he never once smiled. Grin was from Sergeant DeLorenzo's platoon, until Sergeant DeLorenzo -- and three-quarters of his platoon -- were wiped out by the first Alliance airplane to show up.
At Mal's questioning glance, Grin said, "Sergeant, Command says they're holding until they can assess our status."
Mal's jaw fell open. "Our status is, we need some gorram air support. Now get back online, tell 'em to get in here!" What is it about Command that they must insist on having their heads firmly implanted in their rectums?
Even as Mal spoke, Zoë Alleyne leapt in from above. "That skiff is shredding us, sir."
Zoë had been with Mal in the 57th from the beginning of the war, and it hadn't taken long for him to count on her as his right hand. Mal knew he was a decent soldier, all things considered, but Zoë was brilliant. There were times when Mal was convinced that, had Zoë been on the Alliance's side, this war would be over, and the Browncoats would be done for. And had there been more like Zoë, he suspected that a lot more of his people would be alive. As it was, only he, Zoë, Bendis, and McAvoy were left of the original 57th,
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KRAD,
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I love this & I love the deeper dig into Mal's loss of faith. I definately plan on reading this. Are there other aspects of the show not "shown" in the movie that are fleshed out here?
If this is too spoilery of a question. Just e-mail me at stillshiny@gmail.com
By the way, any chance of getting signed copies? - yep. shameless that's me.
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