Feedback on CafePress design please!

POSTED BY: fray101
UPDATED: Wednesday, June 15, 2005 12:25
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FRAY101

Tuesday, June 14, 2005 5:33 PM

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FRAY101

Tuesday, June 14, 2005 6:59 PM

OK, second version (without "spiderwebs"). If it's not stylised it looks too much like the "real" thing - but is it too much? Or too similar to items already available?

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CALLMESERENITY

Tuesday, June 14, 2005 7:14 PM

Okay, I've been hesitating to respond so you don't think I'm starting my own Fray Fan Club but I like it. I like the first one (With spiderwebs?). The scratchy looking one. I think it would look best on a coloured t-shirt. Maybe a heathered grey?
And I'm also thinking if you're going to put any words on it, put it on the back? Let the ship speak for itself.

That's my opinion.

Keep creating, Fray, they will come.

"What's the use of a house if you haven't got a tolerable planet to put it on?"-H.D. Thoreau

FRAY101

Tuesday, June 14, 2005 7:27 PM

Where would I be without you?!

I actually like the first one but I posted it in the Blue Sun Room and someone commented that it looked like it was covered in spiderwebs! Which, when I looked at it again, I suppose it does. But I still prefer it to the other one.

As for the colour choice - well, being CafePress it's a bit limited of course! Will look lovely on the lime green, I'm sure!

Maybe I'll do two versions - one with the writing on the back (where that's an option) and
the other one as shown here.

Thanks for the input!

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CALLMESERENITY

Wednesday, June 15, 2005 1:44 AM

You and I must just have similar styles and tastes, is all.

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FRAY101

Wednesday, June 15, 2005 8:08 AM

Still looking into doing the text separately but the original design can now be seen here:

http://www.cafepress.com/fireflyclass

As CallMeSerenity knows, the shirts in my "River" store, feature the slogan "Aim to Misbehave. Serenity: Fall 2005" on the back. Wasn't sure whether to add that to these as well, or will it date them?

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CALLMESERENITY

Wednesday, June 15, 2005 12:07 PM

I think that turned out quite nice! I hope you sell lots.

And my suggestion-leave the date off-at least until we know for sure when the movie is being released.

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FRAY101

Wednesday, June 15, 2005 12:25 PM

No way would I put a specific date on it! Besides, being in the UK we're different anyway.

Think I'll leave it as it is - thanks for the support hon!

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