The Virtual Series (4?)

POSTED BY: Sarahetc
UPDATED: Wednesday, October 19, 2005 16:16
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SARAHETC

Tuesday, February 25, 2003 2:45 PM

Hey y'all,

Whatever happened to the Virtual Series? Seems we divied up tasks and no one was ever heard from again.

I still want to hear what's going to happen.

So, call for quorum of sorts, if you will. Sound off.

Sarah

LOSTANGEL

Tuesday, February 25, 2003 4:00 PM

Funny thing, I've kind of lost my partner. I haven't heard from him in a week, but I think it's because he and I got busy with other things. My huge writer's block didn't help. I just got unblocked, but with the weather burying my car in, and me moving this weekend, I can't get to my processor.

What about everyone else?

______________________
Lost Angel

WASH: Psychic, though? That sounds like something out of science fiction.
ZOE: We live in a space ship, dear.
WASH: So?

LEGALBEGAL

Tuesday, February 25, 2003 8:53 PM

Hi everyone one. Episode one is done with mabye one more scene being added to the end. I have been in contact with Haken and a couple of the writers just waiting on some more episodes before we start to post. Most likely they will be placed somewhere on this site for download. Will post again with more info tomorrow.

Sorry bout the wait. You can reach me at legal_chaos@yahoo.com if you need to send in a script or just have a question about Season one of VirtualFly.

GUAILO

Wednesday, February 26, 2003 3:00 AM

That's interesting since I thought LostAngel and I were working on ep1...

Oh well...

I've been utterly swamped at work and still want to write this thing, but if she and I have been cut out of the deal, then that's that. I just wish someone could have let the two of us know....

Mal: “The next time you decide to stab me in the back, have the guts to do it to my face.”

LEGALBEGAL

Wednesday, February 26, 2003 5:53 PM

A mistake made on my part when we started dividing up episodes is indeed the reason that two versions of episode one in your case episodes 1 and 2 where written or are being written. I am sincerely sorry about this and will try my best to make sure that we use both scripts but we may have to change some things in one script or the other because they may appear in both.

These items being Hui. Jayne visiting a prostitute and Inaras shuttle crashing. A s far as I know you used Jubal as your villian. Daniel used Badger.

Again the mistake was all mine and I am sorry.

SARAHETC

Wednesday, February 26, 2003 6:16 PM

I'm glad y'all got that arranged.

When will we get to see them? When will we get hints or something, for those of us writing the later ones?

Guailo, if it makes you feel better, I put you in a story! :)

Sarah

I'm a dying breed who still believes, haunted by American dreams. ---Neko Case

LOSTANGEL

Wednesday, February 26, 2003 6:31 PM

Sarah:

You already did!

In terms of the when part, give us a minute! We gotta wrestle with some things, iron it out, knock out the dents, and give it a shiny paint job!

______________________
Lost Angel

WASH: Psychic, though? That sounds like something out of science fiction.
ZOE: We live in a space ship, dear.
WASH: So?

LEGALBEGAL

Wednesday, February 26, 2003 8:26 PM

Here is the teaser from Daniels version of episode one tentitively titled To Panic.

LEGALBEGAL

Wednesday, February 26, 2003 8:27 PM

VirtualFly Episode #01: To Panic
Writer: Daniel Kurland

TEASER
Scene: Serenity, Wash/Zoe’s Room [Int.], Morning

Camera starts at the door of the room and slowly pans to the floor of the room where we see shirts and pants carelessly lying in a pile. The camera stays there for a few seconds and then slowly pans to the bottom of the bed and moves up so we can see ZOE and WASH under a bed sheet. The two’s conversation has already started.

ZOE
No, I won’t do it.

WASH
Why not, its not that big a deal.

ZOE
You’re asking me to wear my gun holster and gun while we have sex.

WASH
(excited)
And the boots. Without the boots its just –

ZOE
(interrupting)
A naked guy with a bullet wound.

WASH
Kinky, that’s the girl I married.

ZOE
Not one of my proudest moments.

WASH
And what would that proudest moment of yours be?

ZOE
Oh, you really wanna know?

WASH
Yes, and please let it include nakedness and sweatiness.

ZOE
(bluntly)
Besides that.
(proudly)
Probably the time I took down the Ranafal gang in Crossley.

ZOE smiles

ZOE
What’s yours honey?

WASH
(faked pride, staggered as well)
Oh, definitely…when I took care of…business in that bar on…Crossley?

ZOE looks at WASH with a “who are you fooling” sort of look

WASH
Fine, beating KAYLEE at arm wrestling.

ZOE looks at WASH again

WASH
(continuing)
…After five tries.

ZOE
Did you cry over it?

WASH
Noooo.

ZOE
That’s my man.

WASH leans into kiss ZOE. They kiss briefly, ZOE pulls away after a few seconds.

ZOE
RIVER…

WASH
(confused)
Umm, is there something I missed?

ZOE
I was just thinking about RIVER –

WASH
(interrupting)
Dear penthouse…

ZOE
(continuing)
And how she has been acting stranger than usual lately.

WASH
Actually, I have noticed a bit of her insane ramblings to be even
(beat)
well…more insane than usual.

ZOE
(concerned)
I just hope everything’s alright.

WASH
I am sure SIMON has everything under control. He’s a very controlled person. I don’t want you worrying though. I always decided that my wife shouldn’t have to think. Don’t go thinking about things and getting all worried. You’re a warrior not a worrier.

ZOE
(jokingly)
Sometimes wives have to think when their husbands don’t do much of it.

WASH
Sure! I’d love to have sex right now!.

WASH leans onto ZOE again and the two kiss for awhile when a loud beeping is heard causing them to stop and look up.

WASH
Are you a robot? Is that robot noise?

ZOE
You know I’m not a robot.

WASH
(excited)
I thought I did!

ZOE reaches over to the desk near the bed and hands WASH a small hand computer.

ZOE
It’s your computer.

WASH
(defensively)
I know

WASH flips the top of it open and the camera shifts to WASH’S POV and we see only the computer screen. A man’s face takes up the screen. This man is HUI. When WASH talks the camera will shift to a shot of him sitting up on the bed, ZOE off to his left, not incredibly wanted to be seen by this man.

HUI
Hello there WASH. How are things?

WASH
Oh, things are up. Definitely up.

WASH shifts his position underneath the bed sheet.

HUI
Well if you aren’t too busy I have a job you might be interested in taking. Are you?

WASH
(gung-ho)
Just let me put on my pants and I am good to go!

END TEASER

ROLL CREDITS

SARAHETC

Wednesday, February 26, 2003 8:38 PM

Woo! Funny and sexy!

Do they still have Penthouse, I wonder?

Can't wait, can't wait!

And LA, what do I already know/see?

Sarah

I'm a dying breed who still believes, haunted by American dreams. ---Neko Case

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