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Stubborn

Tuesday, May 2, 2006

One-off ficlet. Kaylee's in the mood for something edgy and Jayne's doin' his best to keep both of them out of trouble.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3041    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Disclaimer: Not mine, no pay.

Pairing: Duh, it’s me, folks. Jaylee, of course.

Setting: A one-off fluffy ficlet, not part of my long, sequential series of Jaylee stories. Something to tide you over while I work on “Leaps of Faith.” This assumes nothing about the nature of Jayne and Kaylee’s relationship. Blame it on Kaylee – girl’s stubborn. Darn lil’ story was stubborn, too, and insisted on being written.

Rating: A very suggestive PG15, depending on how smutty your mind is.

Feedback: Please, pretty please?

Stubborn

“Kaylee, are ya really sure ya wanna be doin’ this?” The big man slides his arm around her waist, braces his hip hard against hers. He looks awful uncertain.

“Yeah, I’m sure. I done thought ‘bout it a lot and I wanna…” Her speech is husky and slurred.

“But sugar, “ he patiently explains to her as he tries to steady them both, “once we do this, there ain’t no goin’ back.”

“I ain’t no idget. I’m a… a grown up girl an… I know… wha’ I wanna do and… I wan’ ya ta do it… with me.” She brings her arm up under his, hooks a hand over his shoulder and grins up at him with those wide chocolate eyes.

“Gorrammit, Jayne Cobb, you quit puttin’ me off. I know… gzactly what I’m doin’ and I wanna do it.” She grabs his t-shirt in both hands and pulls him down so their faces are closer.

“Aw, Kaylee, why do ya go gittin’ these ideas in yer lil’ head? I’m doin’ my damndest to behave m’self and tryin’ to help you behave, too.” It’s takin both his hands and a good deal of his strength to hang on to her, especially the way she’s leanin’ all over him.

“Are ya gonna do it with me or ain’t ya?” She’s defiant and determined.

“Jesus, Kaylee, Mal’s gonna kill me. Don’t you know that?”

“Don’ care… come on. You promised…” Now she’s doin’ her best to drag him along, one thing on her mind.

“That’s was ‘for I knowed ya was serious. ‘Sides, yer drunk an ya ain’t got no business makin’ this kinda decision when ya ain’t sober. What happens if ya wak

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 02 May 2006 15:06
Evil. Thought it was something far more lascivious.

Loved it!
Tuesday, 02 May 2006 15:07
Oh, Shiny! You were teasing us all something wicked, hisgoodgirl! Making us think they were up to something all kinds of kinky..... when really they were going to a tattoo parlour!!!

Hi-larious, as the big man hiMself would say. I wonder if Kaylee would regret it the following day and blame Jayne as he supected she might...... Will we ever know??!!
Tuesday, 02 May 2006 15:08
What a fun piece! I wondered about that tatoo I saw in The Message and now here's my answer. Course, I wonder how Mal would discover her "secret" in order to kill Jayne...That could be fun.

Nice story.
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 02 May 2006 15:15
Cute.

Didn't see the tattoo coming, but I knew it wasn't what it sounded like. That would have been too easy.

I love these light little one shots. I hope there are many more to come.
Tuesday, 02 May 2006 16:06
Loved it! Knew it was something other than gettin sexed, but didn't know what. Way to go!
Tuesday, 02 May 2006 17:02
What can I say I have a smutty mind. :)

Didn't see the tattoo thing coming.

Nice little story.
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 02 May 2006 18:33
Ah yes, the "Jayne helps Kaylee get a tattoo" subgenre.

Hey, gotta get subtext where you can.
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 02 May 2006 19:17
I like Jayne struggling to be virtuous and doing his best to look out for Kaylee's best interests - as well as his own. Nice misleading intro, too, for us smutty minded folk <g>
Tuesday, 02 May 2006 19:30
<BIG GRIN> Ahh, memories!
I can see Kaylee being very stubborn when she wants, whether or not she's been drinking
Tuesday, 02 May 2006 23:15
Kaylee's stubborn alright and knows how to press his buttons, threatening to get some other guy to help!

Cute story and I love this line -
“An’ ya need ta pull yer coveralls down some, too. Maybe a li’l lower even.” The merc is lookin at that expanse of luscious creamy skin and tryin’ not to touch."
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 02 May 2006 23:32
i figured it was a tatoo lol :)

very enjoyable tatoo though i'm sure!!

great job
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 03 May 2006 02:26
BWAAH HA HA!! Perfect! And to think, you got Kaylee just right. No telling the amount of times I've been in just the same spot as Jayne, carrying drunken friends to get their first ink. Loved it.
Wednesday, 03 May 2006 03:16
I loved it, too! I have an especially weak spot for DRUNKEN JAYLEE. Jacqui's "Whiskey Bears" one of the first piece of fluff I ever read and actually liked. I can never read that enough and I think this one will suffer the same fate. Must be the co-conspirator feel or something.
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 03 May 2006 03:41
Not sure what I thought it was, but I sure didn't think Kaylee was getting a tattoo. Awesome story, loved the jaylee goodness.
Wednesday, 10 May 2006 19:21
OMG!!! Had to read twice. Did not see the tatoo coming. Got really worried with the "Maybe a lil lower" comment. Guess I have a dirty mind.

Nice job!
Saturday, 08 July 2006 16:09
ooh, naughty hisgoodgirl!!! you're teasing us somethig wicked here!!

b
Thursday, 12 October 2006 16:11
Maybe Jayne will kiss the spot better later <G>?


Vera

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