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Extra Cargo -- Chapter 14: The Guns of Navarone

Friday, April 28, 2006

Another chapter, another book title. The Guns of Navarone and Force 10 from Navarone were some of my favorite books as a teen. I’ve actually gone hunting fro my copies so that I can pull them out and read them again.

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It’s been a few weeks since I posted the last chapter. I’ve been busy, that whole working for a living thing, and a massive case of writer’s block. I’ve taken my “Anonymous’” comments to heart and have tried to work with other points of view and other people in the Firefly universe – it does make for a better story. Thanks to D and Mal4Prez for putting up my kvetching about writer’s block. Lastly I always think starting at the beginning is good, so if you haven't been keeping up with me (or have forgotten things): First off, shame on you! Second here are all of the chapters from the beginning:

, , , , , , , , , and http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=9071”> Chapter 13.

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The crew was assembled in the cargo bay of Serenity. Wash, Zoë, Dr. Mengle (aka Simon) and Captain Reynolds on one side of the bay. Wash, Zoë, and Mal were chatting about what dinner was going to be that that night; who was cooking and the possibility of a poker game that evening. It was Wash’s to cook; that made everyone happy, he was one of the better cooks on board. Right now the chore wasn’t so much cooking as it was cajoling, cajoling the crew to not whine about molded protein. Simon was standing a little to one side of the conversation all nervous, twisting a damp handkerchief around in his hands.

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Friday, 28 April 2006 13:36
Yay, you're back! And with such a good chapter.

I don't trust that Fred *shakes head* he's way too calm.

I love the description of Simon nearly jumping out of his pot belly!lol.

Caroline not wanting to leave Jayne and the Captain's wishing he had captures of her are two of the best moments.

I am waiting now for the next chapter!

Saturday, 29 April 2006 04:06
I too loved those Alistair Maclean books, Guenever:)

This chapter was mighty interesting....numerous Buffyverse references....former Browncoat turned Purplebelly...Mal wanting pictures of Caroline.....great work:D

BEB
Monday, 18 September 2006 16:45
Wow! Can't wait for chapter 15!

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