Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Extra Cargo -- Chapter 13 : Jurassic Park

Thursday, March 30, 2006

I'm a little peeved with 'Anonymous' which I no that spelled wrong; but, he said that I needed to have other people talking. I really hate when I'm not right! I've been trying to be practically perfect in the words of Mary Poppins.
So this chapter became that chapter -- the other people chapter. I've been contemplating adding a little bit to either chapter 10, 11, or 12. I really do hate it when I think of things after the fact. But, I think tying Buffy the Vampire Slayer would be a funny little tidbit to add in -- and no it wouldn't be crossover fic.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3656    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Thursday, 30 March 2006 02:58
Could a person know more about sex then Jayne?

haha, that is a very good question

~kaynara
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 30 March 2006 03:24
thats pretty good.
SERENITY14
Thursday, 30 March 2006 03:25
'we are such stuff as dreams are made of'
prospero, in the tempest.
Thursday, 30 March 2006 04:01
I've been following this story from the beginning and enjoy it very much!

Can't wait to find out what happens next.

Favorite line: Could a person know more about sex then Jayne? So completely Jayne.
Thursday, 30 March 2006 04:40
Uh...wouldn't Inara have an inkling of knowing more about sex and sexual psychology than Jayne does? Cuz if not....the Guild needs more work;)

Still...excellent chapter Guenever!

BEB
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 30 March 2006 05:30
Hi...I'm the anonymous that made that thought provoking comments last chapter....sorry to annoy you so. But you do a great job, and I'm just tryin' to help you along. I loved this chapter, just a little slice of everyone else is awful nice. Firefly is so great becuase of the amazing ensemble. I am in the middle of remodeling a house and moving out of my condo...otherwise, I'd love to beta for you. Maybe in a few more weeks/chapters....

naiad
Thursday, 30 March 2006 12:02
Love this chapter. I like that Kaylee was worried that she had too good a life, and the Shepherd's rounds. They're wonderful.
Thursday, 30 March 2006 12:03
Love this chapter. I like that Kaylee was worried that she had too good a life, and the Shepherd's rounds. They're wonderful.
Thursday, 30 March 2006 12:26
My thought provoking Anonymous fan. I'm not mad at you; more peeved with myself. I find 'the other characters' much harder to write. I know people who speak like Kaylee, Mal, Jayne, and the Shepard. Amd my husband is at least speech wise, and moral wise about the same as Mal.

I feel for you on the remodeling thing; ours is currently gutted and we are living in one room. It sucks, and this story has kept me sane for the last couple monthes.
Thursday, 30 March 2006 20:52
I just read all the current posts and I want more

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