Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Forward Motion - Part 6

Thursday, April 20, 2006

Simon tries to determine the best way to help River, while Mal goes after another job and some more coin. But what will the blue-handed men have to say about that?

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“Mei mei, what have you done?”

The dream was different now. River could still see the faces and the bodies of her family, surrounding her in puddles of their own blood. She could still make out Simon’s disgusted and horrified face. But she no longer felt any remorse for her actions.

She dropped the blood red blades to the ground, and instead of watching Simon walk away, she turned and left him, heading for a door on the far side of the room, bathed in light. A door through which stood two men, with blue-gloved hands, smiling benevolently and applauding her actions. She smiled back at them, a cold, calculating smile and listened with disinterest as Simon’s anguished cry reached her.

“River!”

Abruptly, River stopped mid-stride, immediately aware that something was wrong. She didn’t want to go to the blue-gloved men. They were mean and frightening and she remembered them vividly from her time at the Academy. But she couldn’t stop herself. They continued to draw closer and River frantically searched for an exit, any way out of this increasingly eerie dream. But there was nothing. Just four solid gray walls with no way out and the two men.

Turning fear-filled eyes on them, she watched in horror as they got close enough to touch her and laid their hands on her forearms. “Time to come with us,” one of them said, pulling her towards the door they had entered from.

She struggled with every fiber of her being, with every ounce of strength she could muster, but it wasn’t enough; it was never enough. She tried planting her feet, but they continued to drag her away, her feet inexorably sliding towards the open door and her inevitable fate.

“No, no, no, no …”

“River, sweetie, wake up.”

River came out of the dreamscape, but kept her eyes closed. The presence she felt in the room now was not the one she had expected and it took her a moment to bring it into focus. When realization dawned, and she had managed to slow her heart beat again, she said, “Where’s Simon?”

Kaylee

Comments
Thursday, 20 April 2006 02:11
River is creeping me out here!

And - those blue handed men want Simon, huh? Hmm.....this could be fun...

Angst coming? I love angst!

So - Mal gonna take the job...?
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 20 April 2006 04:32
Very intense.

I keep running over the possible roads from here in my head, but I get the feeling that this is heading somewhere I can't predict.

Really great chapter. Please keep going, or the suspense is gonna kill me.
Thursday, 20 April 2006 06:22
I really want to hit that Harris upside of his head. How can he possibly think dealing with those Hands of Blue will bring anything but pain and damnation on his friends and the Tams? And why is it that Harris sounds like a clone of Monty, right down to the whiskers and him lifting Mal off his feet in a bear hug? And River, oh poor poor River, I can't bear all the back to back sorrow crowding in on her without a single glimmer of hope. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Thursday, 20 April 2006 06:26
Well now...things are getting mighty interesting for the BDHs.

The Blue Hands want Simon, huh? Now why do I get the feeling it's more about succeeding with a slightly different model than used before (River) than baiting River....

BEB
Friday, 21 April 2006 09:40
I got lucky cause I have been out of town, so I got to read the series in one sitting! This is just great! I enjoyed your last series tremendously and this one lives up to that standard, can't wait for your next post!
Thursday, 08 June 2006 17:56
I am also lucky like Leigh, though when I get to the end of everything you have written I know I will be eager for more. I'll probably offer you cookies in exchange for posting more stories, though that hasn't worked for some other writers that I like.

Yay for someone making Zoe smile, even though he is a double-crossing hwoon dan.

You always have new ways of River hurting. :( I keep reading because you write it so well, and I have hope that after things get worse there is a chance they will get better.

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