Again, please let this play out to its end before getting too mad. There's a lot to go. At least 8 stories with multiple chapters in a lot of them. This one has at least 5 chapters.
Review and let me know how you think its going. Guess how it will all turn out or let me know what you'd like to see.
Most of the story is written, I'm just tweaking and adding and editing things until the day I post.
This hasn't been an easy story to write but I hope I'm treating the characters with the same amount of respect as I am trying to treat the subject matter.
As always, please read the warning contained in Chapter 1 as the subject matter might be offensive to some.
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Chapter 3
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Kaylee couldn’t sleep. She lay beside Simon, her head on his uninjured shoulder, watching him, listening to his steady heartbeat. Silent tears crept down her cheeks as she tried to push back the fear and anxiety in her heart. It was only Simon lying beside her. Sleeping. He wasn’t even moving. But Kaylee couldn’t close her eyes without feeling strong, rough hands pin her in place. If she closed her eyes, she could see their faces, hear their voices. At least with her eyes open she could look at her husband.
But even that handsome sight did nothing to calm her trembling hands and her thudding heart. As she looked around the room they’d shared for over a year, it seemed too small all of a sudden, claustrophobic. She had dimmed the lights to make it easier for Simon to sleep, but she couldn’t extinguish them completely. The shadows moved and everywhere she looked she felt terror creep down her spine.
Unable to breathe, she quickly pressed a kiss to Simon’s cheek and slid out of bed. She dressed hastily and padded out into the common room making sure it was lit well enough. She wandered for a long while, her journey finally stopping in the cargo bay. She stared unblinking at the pile of crates she had been held against and shivered. She concentrated, her hands shaking for the effort, but her mind was blank
~kaynara
Very good chapter, I can't wait to read more!
~Jules~
Lovely chapter. *loves drama*
Can't wait to read more!
You can't take the sky from me
What happened was the lesser of two evils. . . it will all be explained, don't worry :)
I'm not going to be nice and give the reader all the explanations all at once? :P
>would love to see simon and mal start putting the pieces together!
Well - you'll just have to read and see.
>Badger needs to suffer for his part in this and so does the person who hired him
*smiles evily*
While I know that women can beat men for revenge planning...a plan dreamt up by a skilled soldier and a trauma surgeon will be mighty painful but not immediately fatal;)
Oh no....I have faith the two of them will think of some mighty dark ideas for those who wronged Kaylee and Inara (evil grin).
BEB
“No, Sir.” She hadn’t told him she was ready to rip the throat out of everyone involved and then impale them on a spit, watching happily as they died slowly and painfully. It would do no good. For him, or the rest of the crew. So she kept her anger bottled. It would come in handy when they finally caught up with that little weasel.
I've got chills and tears at reading these. Thanks :-D
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