Blue Sun Room FICTION - DRAMA

Moan

Thursday, November 29, 2007

Simon and kaylee disturb the ship with their nocturnal activities. Post BDM. Part of a challenge table. Rated NC-17 for adult content.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 5539    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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This was written a long time ago and I guess I never posted it. In looking through some old files, I found it and decided to post.

I'm working on a new, really long story, that will no doubt take forever for me to post, so - these little ones will have to do until I finish it.

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The challenge table can be found here. These stories will not be linked into a series but will stand on their own and will in some way revolve around Simon Tam.

To see a list of the prompts, go http://www.geocities.com/maegovannen/Firefly/69FicChallenge.html>; Here.

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1.Moan

Mal rolled over and glared sleepily at the wall. With a string of curses that even Jayne would have raised an eyebrow at, he grasped his pillow and brought it down over his head. At this point, he wouldn’t have cared if it suffocated him.

He was tired and cranky – and being forced to listen to two of his crew member’s decidedly un-cranky behavior was starting to grate on his nerves.

~*~

Zoe stared at the wall with a raised eyebrow and the faintest hint of a smile. While her heart still ached for the loss of her husband, she was glad that Simon and Kaylee had finally found comfort in one another’s company. Of course, she would have preferred not to hear – repeatedly – just how comfortable they had become with each other.

But – she was happy for them, nonetheless.

~*~

Jayne leaned against the wall, his ear mashed so tightly against it, the appendage would no doubt be red and swollen in the morning. He grunted lustfully at the sounds, unable to believe the prissy doc could in any way satisfy the bubbly mechanic.

He wrinkled his nose at the wall when he heard something he’d never want to hear again come out of Simon’s mouth. He bit his tongue and resisted the urge to yell through the wall for the man to be quiet.

He’d rather hear Kaylee moaning.

~*~

River sat on the bridge, her knees drawn to her chest, her arms wrapped around them in their customary position. Gooseflesh pebbled her arms as

Comments
SUVIE
Thursday, 29 November 2007 18:24
Yeah ... too much to love with this one. Great job as usual!
Thursday, 29 November 2007 19:13
Fans face... Oh my!
Friday, 30 November 2007 00:55
As usual with your stories, very X-rated and very enjoyable, all the better cause it has my two favorite characters, making me all hot and bothered and wishing I wasn't single again. Oh well, I can always go to my bunk.
Friday, 30 November 2007 01:13
Oh, my...well now....

cbsteve's got a really good point, but for me it's not so much the bunk I'm gonna need as it's the 15-20 pounds of ice I'm gonna need just to get to the bunk! LOL...
Well written, of course, and fair to say very sexy. But that would be par for the course....:)
Friday, 30 November 2007 16:43
Sweet love!

I like how you have the different crew members listening in through the walls. It makes it all the funnier at the end when they start pounding on the walls disturbing Simon and Kaylee's attempts to sleep.

Nice pacing and flow. You could really feel the slow, sensuous moans in the words, so beautiful I forgot I was reading and just felt every moment.

:)
-vb
Wednesday, 01 July 2009 05:11
I love the story (and most of your posts)
but the angst ridden bit from Simon makes me upset, especially considering that is how Simon would think.

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