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Crashing Through - Chapter 2

Monday, April 17, 2006

What happened to Wash, then?

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Chapter 2

Present Time

“Alright folks, listen up.” Mal stood in the cargo bay, addressing his crew as the fading light of evening crept in through the open door. The rest of the crew spread out around him, standing or leaning against boxes and crates. “As ya all know, Wash’s a little too late getting’ back for my liking. Might be nothing, might be trouble, but either way, we’re gonna go find out. Jayne and Zoë, yer with me. The rest of ya hang out here, but keep yer eyes open.”

“I’d like to go with you,” Shepard Book spoke up.

“Preacher, I appreciate the offer but-”

“Captain,” Book cut the man off mid-sentence. “Another pair of eyes will significantly increase the search area, and the doctor and ladies are more than capable of watching your ship. I’d like to help.”

Mal paused, thinking. He didn’t like being interrupted, or having his orders questioned, but Book had a point. It was getting late and they needed their pilot back.

“Fine,” he agreed curtly. “You ‘n Jayne go check the taverns and bars. It maybe Wash just got a mite distracted. Zoë, you ‘n me’ll go scout out the marketplace.” He tossed Jayne one of the hand-held comm. units. “Anyone see somethin’ interesting, or find the man, holler. Iffin he beats us back ta the ship, Kaylee give us a wave.”

Book and Jayne nodded then left, Jayne’s swagger as he marched down the ramp strangely complimentary to Book’s steady, purposefully gate. As he watched them leave, Mal motioned Kaylee over to him.

“Yeah, Cap’n?”

“Keep yer eyes open, little Kaylee, an’ keep the doc and his sis outa sight. This ain’t an Alliance planet, but Wash being this late is makin’ me nervous. Better safe ‘n sorry. You notice anything suspicious, anything at all, you lock this boat down tighter than a drum and call us back.”

“Okay, Cap’n,” Kaylee agree, nodding solemnly. She could tell Mal was worried about their friend, even though he was trying not to let it show. “We won’t do nothing stupid, I promise.”

Mal gave her a ge

Comments
Monday, 17 April 2006 07:39
An excellent chapter:) As much as I hate to see anyone beating up on poor Wash, I love this story and I can't wait to see what happens next. This is a sure-fire way to infuriate the two most frightening people on that ship, and I can only imagine how they're going to react! Loved the line about appropriate activities for mentally unstable teenagers too :lol:

Now please tell me you didn't break our sweet, funny Wash. He's gonna be okay, right? Right?

Now I sound like Kaylee.
Monday, 17 April 2006 11:03
Okay, how the heck did Wash manage to get himself tarred and feathered?!
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 17 April 2006 11:41
Tarred and feathered, huh? Somebody must REALLY not be a fan of old Cap'n Mal - someone with a penchant for American history.
Monday, 17 April 2006 12:59
Just went back to read the other 2 chapters- very good! This is an extremely satisfying series so far, can't wait for more! Poor, poor Wash! His explaination is gonna be good. Hope to see more soon!
Monday, 17 April 2006 23:57
I wonder if Wash being tarred and feathered isn't because of something he (Wash himself) did before joining Serenity as her pilot? Cuz if someone wanted to mess with the Captain & co....why not just torture him like Niska did?

BEB
Tuesday, 18 April 2006 21:43
this is fun! well... not the whole wash being hurt... but its really well written and long to find out how it ends! write more quickly!!
Tuesday, 31 October 2006 12:18
So glad that Wash is back on Serenity and Zoe and Mal are heading back too but who took him and why? Seems like some enemy of Mal's is taking it out on his crew. Ali D :~)
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