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Crashing Through - Chapter 11

Friday, January 12, 2007

Mal has found his nemisis.

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Chapter 11

“Well?”

Simon cringed slightly under the glare Mal was giving him. He couldn’t help it. “He’ll be fine. It was close. Very close. If you hadn’t been there, in the room with him right at that moment, I’m pretty sure he’d be dead now, but… Well, thankfully you were and we caught it in time. Once I knew what it was, the antidote was easy enough to simulate.”

“The antidote for the poison? The poison that you assured me hours ago wasn’t there?” The captain’s voice was frigid. Simon sighed and sank onto the couch, running a hand through his hair.

“I know, Mal. I’m beating myself up enough for missing it. You don’t have to help, not that I think saying that will stop you. In my defense, however, this poison was unlike anything I’ve ever seen. It was constructed to stay hidden in the blood stream for almost twenty-four hours before it even started to break up and spread. Until an hour ago I thought something like that was only possible in theory on the pages of very complicated textbooks.”

“But it’s gone now, right?” Mal pressed, his face more serious than Simon had ever seen it. “You tell me you are one hundred percent sure my pilot is out of the woods. That there is nothin’ else wrong that’s gonna come back to bite him later, ‘cause I’m tired of playing games with his life an’ he’s out of second chances. He can’t afford for you to miss something again!”

Simon paused for a moment and a heavy silence filled the air between the two men. Mal said nothing as he waited for an answer, but the tightness of his jaw and weary lines around his eyes spoke more loudly than anything how he was dealing with all of this. Simon decided to ignore the cold tone and accusatory words that had been sent his way, knowing it was just Mal’s way of trying to cope with being totally out of control of events.

“It’s over. I double – triple checked everything, common, uncommon, unheard of. He’s clean.”

“Good,” Mal said shortly.

“Whoever this guy is,” Simon spoke again after

Comments
Friday, 12 January 2007 10:12
Just when we could do with a sane River to help untangle this deathly enemy's scheme... So happy to hear that the antidote worked and Wash will be okay, Mal is right the man has suffered too much and he shouldn't have to go through it. All manner of worried now that the enemy intends to take them out one by one. Ali D
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 15 January 2007 03:43
What worries me the most is that "Ten Little Indians" - the book by Agatha Christie, I mean - had a certain ending that makes for some very disturbing revelations if applied here :(

Still...brilliant bits of dialogue work here, farmgirl:D

BEB
Sunday, 25 February 2007 23:36
Can't believe I missed this for so long... man, I just can't wait to see where this goes.
HORATIOFROG
Tuesday, 31 July 2007 03:13
I'm with BEB here--good old Agatha was not so nice to her "Indians" in her novel, not at all, and her play version wasn't much nicer. Does this mean that the rest of the crew will be taken one by one..."until there were none?"

And what of the mysterious nemesis? Judging from his voice pattern, it's not someone we've met yet, and it's likely a Rim-worlder from his accent. Perhaps an enemy from the War? Or something more personal?

I notice this hasn't been updated recently--please, for the love of all that is good and holy, finish this tale!

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