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Preacher's Prayer - Ch4 and 5

Saturday, March 20, 2004

Book's past causes trouble for the crew of Serenity.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3642    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Disclaimer: Characters do not belong to me. Until Joss's movie comes out, I'm just entertaining myself and others.

Not Beta-ed, all mistakes are mine.

I will note that I don't have any military experience -- tried to keep everything general though. Almost done now!

Summary: Everyone except River and Kaylee are at the kidnapper/vigilante's camp and the trial is about to start.

Ch 4

Chinese

Shide - yes

Zhuzui – quiet, shut up.

ta-ma-de hwu dan – mother humping son of a bitch

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Nate rubbed his face tiredly and decided it was probably time to wake Mayli. The men were getting restless about the possibility that the settlement might call the feds in and were eager to be rid of the preacher and the rest of Serenity's crew. He'd watched their interactions carefully when he could and he was beginning to think that it would be difficult for Mayli to get all of these people to agree to condemn their friend. The short man didn't appear to hold grudges while the Companion was impossible to fully predict. Neither of them appeared to have ever experienced anything that would cause them to fully sympathize with Mayli's anger.

Of course, if you only glanced at Mayli in passing, you'd never imagine what she was capable either. When he'd found her in the wreckage of her home nine years ago, Mayli had just turned twenty and looked all of fourteen. At least until you looked at her eyes, he thought. That haunted look had been the reason he'd requested permission to stay on Temburong when the unit his med team was attached to received orders to leave. Since there had been so many injured and very few doctors or healers had survived, his commander had agreed grudgingly that their unit could spare a lowly medic. Mayli had been confused when he told her he'd left the Independents. All of the enlisted people she had seen had either been idealistic or angry. She decided in turns that he was either a co

Comments
Saturday, 20 March 2004 09:32
Excellent. I loved the diaglogue between Mal and Book in particular. The notion that vegeance cannot buy back a soul but only propel it into a yawning abyss of emptiness is a poignant reminder that when we think like the enemy we can so easily become the enemy. Well done, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Saturday, 20 March 2004 21:08
Wow, this one is really building up nicely! Love the dynamics between Mal and Book.

The one thing that kinda bugged me was Book remembering his wife, he states twice in Serenity that he was never married. But then, I guess we do have to take most of what Book says about his past with a grain of salt...LOL

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Saturday, 20 March 2004 21:27
Love it, the tension between Mal and Book, and later how they understand each other. Can't wait to read the next chapter. Keep up the good work!
Sunday, 21 March 2004 00:17
Actually forgot about Book mentioning not being married. Ahh well, artistic license and all:)

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