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Forward Motion - Part 1

Saturday, April 15, 2006

Four months Post-BDM. Life on <i>Serenity<i> is starting to get back to normal, but the need for a job may soon put them all back in danger.

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Thanks to Leiasky for her invaluable input and support at just about every turn. This story is probably about ten chapters and then will lead itself to a sequel.

The characters aren't mine. They belong to the beautifully twisted mind of Joss Whedon.

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River placed one bare foot in front of the other, carefully balancing her weight straight down her middle. She had walked this tightrope before, learned to find the perfect mixture of black and white to make the ideal shade of gray. It was nothing new to her.

Her arms were extended to her sides as she walked along the catwalk’s railing. They waved a bit from side to side as she took each step, re-centering her balance. As she walked to the end of the bar, she knew she should jump down to the walkway just a few feet below. But she didn’t want to; she wanted to fly.

Closing her eyes against the harsh lights in the cargo bay, River lifted her chin and stretched onto her tip toes. Her calf muscles tensed at the movement as her entire frame was supported on the ten little pads of her feet. She felt her body tense as it again tried to compensate for the change in her movements, tried to adjust to keep her balanced. Releasing a huge sigh, River jumped down to the walkway and felt the lightness of floating for a split second before her feet again touched metal.

Opening her eyes, she surveyed the empty cavernous room as the adrenaline rushed from her body, her muscles again relaxing. Physically, it might be impossible for River to take wing, but she could fly Serenity, and that ability would have to satisfy her need for more – for now.

Turning towards the bridge, River padded up through the empty ship. Everyone was asleep – well, almost everyone. River grimaced slightly as she felt Simon and Kaylee’s passion play taking place in her brother’s bunk. Ever since Miranda, River’s ability as a reader had grown tenfold and while it was sometimes useful in blackmailing Simon, she

Comments
Saturday, 15 April 2006 19:00
Ohh, River's being all creepifying again. I'm guessing that spells certain danger for our BDH's.

That she's been keeping her mental state a secret from Simon so that he can finally be happy with Kaylee is so heartbreaking. She knows he gave up everything to rescue her and is now trying to give something back to him.

I'm definitely eagerly looking forward to seeing what happens next!
Saturday, 15 April 2006 21:37
It's gripping so far.

I'm kinda impatient, please give more quick.
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 15 April 2006 23:43
I can't believe Mal isn't taking more notice of River. She has proved herself time and time again and the Captain is normally the one paying extra attention. It also felt odd that it should be Zoe insisting they go to Badger for a job. Can't wait to see what happens next, loved your River. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Sunday, 16 April 2006 06:11
It's amazing how you have captured the crew's post-BDM mental balances...especially Mal and River's (so far). Quite in-character and depressing...the sheer amount of martyrdom complex coming off the two of them is completely insane but oh so true for these two.

Penitance for perceived sins...gonna be a long road for everyone:(

BEB
Thursday, 08 June 2006 16:07
Yay for any story that includes the blue hand men. :)

Good River thought:

*And they think I’m a child, she thought grimly,*

Poor River, always having to look after her men... :)

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