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Leaps of Faith - 8

Friday, April 14, 2006

Mal’s shaky deal with gun-runner Hadley Emerson is goin’ down, and Kaylee’s scared Jayne won’t make it back to her.

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Rating: PG-17, action/graphic violence

Remarks: Set following my most recent story “The Birthday Gift”, after “Objects in Space”. Inara has departed from Serenity and things on board ship are getting more difficult. Click on my name to read the backstory. They’re all backstory.

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Leaps of Faith

Chapter Eight

“Mal, we’re on the ground.” Wash announces their landing in the hilly, tall grass prairie of Aberdeen.

Mal grabs the handset. “This is the Captain. We’re on, people. Wash, you keep ‘er hot, ready to pick us up mid-air if necessary.” He claps his hands together and hits the buttons to open the cargo bay doors and lower Serenity’s ramp. “Let’s get rollin’!”

Striding down the ramp, he surveys the land that spreads out before him, thinkin’ what good cattle country it would make. Wave after wave of rolling hills march to the horizon, undulating in shades of green and gold under a cloudless turquoise sky.

Zoë slips the second shuttle free of her moorings and brings the little craft around to land right in front of the ramp. She slides the shuttle’s hatch open and nods to the captain.

“Shuttle handles good, Sir. Whatever Kaylee did really seems to have improved her maneuvering.”

“Let’s get her loaded up, then.”

Jayne and Kaylee stand at the back of the bay, concealed behind the stack of crates. He’s geared up for the job, his best sniper rifle slung across his back, a semi-automatic Deckler 9 millimeter on his chest, the heavy belt around his hips loaded with more weaponry and ammunition. His mind’s already on the tasks ahead.

“Jayne…” Kaylee anxiously grabs his elbow, tugs. “Promise me you’ll be careful.”

The merc studies her wide chocolate eyes for a moment, then oh-so-briefly kisses her before he turns and says over his shoulder with the practiced bravado of a professional gun, “Would

Comments
Friday, 14 April 2006 21:01
Oh....I wonder if Jayne's gonna try for some permanent paybeck against Emerson besides the buggered eye? Cuz the bastard deserves it, but....things could spiral:(

BEB
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 14 April 2006 21:54
The anticipation is killing me. Must see what happens next.
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 14 April 2006 22:34
< “Brave smile can’t keep him safe,” River murmurs to herself. “Too much empty space. They’ll both fall down.”>

Sounds like River needs to be warning somebody.

ANONYMOUS
Friday, 14 April 2006 22:54
Oohh. I like this series. Some authors can do romance, some can do action, some can do -um, er, intimate romance, but few can actually do them all, and do them well. I'm very interested to see what happens next!
Saturday, 15 April 2006 01:38
I don't like the sound of River's comment. Don't hurt Jayne,or Zoe, or Mal, too badly! Can't wait to see what's next!
Saturday, 15 April 2006 01:56
River's comment gave me the creeps. You KNOW that can't be a good sign. It's not like she's wrong often. Oh, the pins and needles!

Keep up the good work. Thanks for your efforts.
Saturday, 15 April 2006 12:04
Great lead up to the showdown, love Jayne's professionalism.

River says both fall down...not Jayne and Kaylee? Please.

Needless to say I love this chapter & can't wait for more.
Saturday, 15 April 2006 13:00
I really enjoyed reading about Jayne going about his job. You did a very good job, I could picture this all happening.

I'm waiting patiently for the next chapter....please don't hurt the crew...
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 15 April 2006 15:54
I'm anxious for more! I like how you describe how Jayne tracks.
Saturday, 15 April 2006 16:19
I like your Jayne in this series. Thoughtful and a bit ruthless all at the same time. I'm very interested to see where you take this, given your theories in some of the recent threads.
Saturday, 24 June 2006 14:27
you keep our big noisy boys and tough gal safe!!

b
Friday, 19 August 2011 20:45
too busy reading to comment :D

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