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BOOK OF DAYS SERIES: #31. "All Good Things Must Come to an End - Chapter 1"

Friday, April 14, 2006

Mal, Zoe, River and Jayne are out on a job leaving Simon the only one that stands between four armed men and two unarmed women. 31st story in a series. Simon/Kaylee. PLEASE read the warning attached to the beginning of this story.

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Title: All Good Things Must Come to an End

Rating: NC-17

Synopsis: Mal, Zoe, River and Jayne are out on a job leaving Simon the only one that stands between four armed men and two unarmed women.

Timeline: Takes place 17 months after Miranda. 1 month after Simon and Kaylee’s wedding.

Notes: Next part of a series beginning with : And So It Begins, Kiss Me, Coming Together, Tell Me, What’s Proper?, Tears , Peekaboo, Impatient, Waking Up is Hard to Do, The Talk, I See You, Exhaustion .Moving Day, Celebration, Surprise , Vacation, Reunion, Manipulation, Baby Talk, A First Time for Everything, The Way It Is, A Special Day, Girl Talk, The Gift, Breaking It In, Making Plans, Friends and Enemies, Where I Belong , Private Time , The Games We Play, All Good Things Come to an End

Disclaimer: This story is not meant to infringe on the copyright of any person or company related to the trademarked characters and situations depicted in the Serenity movie or Firefly series. I make no money from this. Only done for fun - and a desperate craving to have more stories told about this wonderful ‘verse Joss Whedon created.

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I had this chapter done, and certain events in my life today made me reconsider my decision not to start posting this until I'd written the final 8 stories in this series.

Oddly, the ending is written, I just need to go fill in a bunch of things I've not completed in the middle.

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Notes: This story depicts implied non-consentual attacks. Do not read if you are squeamish about such things. It is not graphic.

The events as they truly happened in this chapter have been PURPOSLY left vague. More will be revealed in subsequent chapters and stories.

Please be patient and let the rest of the series play out to its end, you may be surprised (or not) where it leads.

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“Wonder what we’re gonna do with half the day to ourselves.” Kaylee sashayed around the cargo bay after closing the doors, battin

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 14 April 2006 18:54
And there they go, right to a VERY dark place. Excellent work, as ususal. After reading your note above about life events I hope all is going well for you.

Keep up the great work.
-goblueguy
Friday, 14 April 2006 19:00
Dude.

You're evil.

Totally.

Ruthelessly.

Evil.
Friday, 14 April 2006 19:13
I hope the blood on the hairpins came from Inara jabbing them into the eyes of that houzi de pigu in her shuttle.

Write more soon!
Friday, 14 April 2006 19:26
This is chillingly good. I hate seeing anyone in pain, especially the luminous Kaylee and Inara, but I guess that the title really is true - all good things must come to an end.

Please make everyone better and take out those SOBs who did this!
Friday, 14 April 2006 19:32
Gah...

You are cruel... and this is awesome.

Keep writing... can't wait to see where this goes.
Friday, 14 April 2006 20:21
I could say that you are EVIL!!!!, but then I'd be a hypocrite. Either way, this was some quality stuff, please say that you aren't gonna make us wait for the next part!!!
GIRLLEABHAR
Friday, 14 April 2006 20:25
oh my. i have to know more please. i look foward to reading more of this story. :)
Friday, 14 April 2006 20:47
Damn...you really know how to hit the ground running with angst and dark stuff, Leiasky:D

Still...a double rape? That's pushing things to a limit even Joss was sparse in using....plus how Kaylee, Inara and Simon are gonna deal with the repercussions. Oh...and the rest of the crew are gonna be going through some tough times with failing the three of them (at least in their own minds).

BEB
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 14 April 2006 23:21
(this is Mechanic Girl Kaylee, but I'm running dialup and I don't think it'll let me log in)

Oh...my God.

I await more. *stress*

Brilliant as always though. Worth waiting for.
Saturday, 15 April 2006 01:44
Whew!
My heart is still racing 10 minutes after I read this.

I've been reading your stuff for a while and really like it but this time you outdid yourself.

I just hope those hairpins were put to good use.
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 15 April 2006 04:10
yay i love angst. and this--good angst! now were these niska's men? and if so...what do they want? beating on mal's crew might please niska some...but he wants mal, right? mal's gonna go out of his mind if they touched inara. when will there be more???

-kaynara
Saturday, 15 April 2006 04:40
I am just waiting for the next post! Yeah, it's a dark place you've gone to, and I can't wait to see how the characters react to the situation. Excellent start.
Saturday, 15 April 2006 05:14
>I hope the blood on the hairpins came from Inara jabbing them into the eyes of that houzi de pigu in her shuttle.

Not the eyes, but, you should all be quite satisfied with what she did do with them.

>please say that you aren't gonna make us wait for the next part!!!

These chapters won't come as quickly as the others, so, yeah, you'll be waiting a bit longer for some of them.

>Mal's gonna go out of his mind if they touched inara

He won't be the only one.

Thanks for the positive comments. I truly expected to get a lot of unhappy ones.

If you can stomach the content, stick with the series until its end, hopefully you'll be happy, well, some of you might not, with the outcome.
Saturday, 15 April 2006 08:18
I've been reading your stuff since I joined, and can only say Wow... I love the good and I love the angst. Keep up the great work.
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 15 April 2006 17:11
This was very well written. Great job! I look forward to the rest, as always.

~wickedwms~
Saturday, 15 April 2006 19:31
awww MAN!!! Now i gotta go lock myself in my room and cry! *shakes fist* love ya girl! everything was very well executed, and i'm just going to have to get used to readin' angst. *sniffles and cries*
Sunday, 16 April 2006 04:29
...OOOh..This was dark...and you know..i'm a HUGE ASS ANGST WHORE! This is great..on to ch.2!
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 18 April 2006 20:26
Oh wow. That was intense. Is Kaylee okay???? And Inara- woot!
Friday, 21 April 2006 14:49
I am disturbed...
Yet compelled to read more.
Thursday, 04 May 2006 03:05
This is awesome right here. I *heart* angst and drama.
Wednesday, 24 May 2006 11:27
This is just what I needed today, some turmoil to take my mind off of my own messed up life.

I hope Inara killed the fucker with those hairpins.

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