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Thanks: To Jacqui, Josh and to Rion, my own personal BDH. You guys are the greatest.
Rating: PG-15, heavy angst - it's all Jacqui's fault.
Remarks: Jayne and Kaylee struggle to define their relationship. It’s the night before the big job.
Set following my most recent story “The Birthday Gift”, after “Objects in Space”. Inara has departed from Serenity and things on board ship are getting more difficult. Click on my name to read the backstory. They’re all backstory.
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Leaps of Faith
Chapter Seven
Kaylee knows Jayne won’t be sleepin’ much the night before a run. Usually she’d leave him alone, knowing he’s always edgy before they pull a job. Especially since the scene in the shuttle earlier in the day, she’s hesitant.
But tonight, somethin’ won’t settle and she finds herself up her ladder before she knows it. She scans the corridor and finds it empty, then steps across to his door, quietly swings it open and descends the rungs.
“I knowed it was you.”
His voice is low, flat. He’s cross-legged on his bunk, loadin’ ammo into a magazine. His eyes are focused on the shells he feeds into the clip. He hasn’t even looked up.
“How come?” Kaylee shifts from foot to foot.
“Only one don’t knock first.”
He’s been agitated ever since Mal announced the job, harsh even with her.
“Why’re ya over here?” He asks. “Ya know I need to get ready for the job.” He pops the last shell in and sets the clip aside, picks up another empty magazine and continues filling it from the box beside him.
“Well…” She stammers, “I, uh, I was worrin’ about ya and couldn’t sleep and…”
“And?” His voice is sharper. “It don’t help me none for you t’be frettin’, Kaylee. Ain’t like this is the first job I been out on since hirin’ on here.”
She bites at her lower lip, ha
Reenie, at work, not wanting to log in!
It's so bitter sweet. Just shiny!
Keep at it!!!
"He starts to tell her no, then realizes he wants her there with him, needs the comfort he finds in her presence. He pauses, then runs his hand through the soft flow of her hair and presses a kiss on her forehead, like a promise"
I love this paragraph, it's beautiful.
BEB
“Kaylee, this is what I do.”
Her eyes fill with tears as a sob tears free from her throat.
What he sees makes his chest ache and his breath rushes out of him like a decompressing airlock. He can’t bear her confusion, her fear. He hates his ineptness with words, how he always seems to say the wrong thing, can’t say what he really feels, hurts the one person he most wants to love.>>
Poor Jayne and poor Kaylee. Reality's a bitch, eh?
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