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Leaps of Faith - 7

Thursday, April 13, 2006

It's the night before the big job, and Kaylee's feeling needy. Jayne's not a lot of comfort.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2866    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Thanks: To Jacqui, Josh and to Rion, my own personal BDH. You guys are the greatest.

Rating: PG-15, heavy angst - it's all Jacqui's fault.

Remarks: Jayne and Kaylee struggle to define their relationship. It’s the night before the big job.

Set following my most recent story “The Birthday Gift”, after “Objects in Space”. Inara has departed from Serenity and things on board ship are getting more difficult. Click on my name to read the backstory. They’re all backstory.

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Leaps of Faith

Chapter Seven

Kaylee knows Jayne won’t be sleepin’ much the night before a run. Usually she’d leave him alone, knowing he’s always edgy before they pull a job. Especially since the scene in the shuttle earlier in the day, she’s hesitant.

But tonight, somethin’ won’t settle and she finds herself up her ladder before she knows it. She scans the corridor and finds it empty, then steps across to his door, quietly swings it open and descends the rungs.

“I knowed it was you.”

His voice is low, flat. He’s cross-legged on his bunk, loadin’ ammo into a magazine. His eyes are focused on the shells he feeds into the clip. He hasn’t even looked up.

“How come?” Kaylee shifts from foot to foot.

“Only one don’t knock first.”

He’s been agitated ever since Mal announced the job, harsh even with her.

“Why’re ya over here?” He asks. “Ya know I need to get ready for the job.” He pops the last shell in and sets the clip aside, picks up another empty magazine and continues filling it from the box beside him.

“Well…” She stammers, “I, uh, I was worrin’ about ya and couldn’t sleep and…”

“And?” His voice is sharper. “It don’t help me none for you t’be frettin’, Kaylee. Ain’t like this is the first job I been out on since hirin’ on here.”

She bites at her lower lip, ha

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 13 April 2006 17:50
Sounds like everybody's scared on this one, and scared people often do stupid things. I hope Jayne will be extra careful and that Kaylee can be strong.
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 13 April 2006 17:59
I am loving this story. I can't wait to read more.
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 13 April 2006 18:57
Haven't reviewed before, but am absolutely addicted to your stories. Have read all of them in the last three days and can't get enough of the Jayne/Kaylee lovin' - its hot, sweet, and very angsty - hope you keep up with the relationship - would quickly go off the story if the skinny doc got between them - his arms aren't half as good as Jayne's!!
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 13 April 2006 20:20
Awwwwwwwww he caved! That was the sweetest thing ever. I have faith they will all be just fine. I just *know* it.

Reenie, at work, not wanting to log in!
Thursday, 13 April 2006 22:10
I've been following this story avidly, reading and re-reading every chapter! Thanky you so much, hisgoodgirl....

It's so bitter sweet. Just shiny!

Keep at it!!!
Thursday, 13 April 2006 23:20
I love it, all angst. Like Jayne I have a bad feeling about this job. But maybe in the end it will resolve some issues for our pair?

"He starts to tell her no, then realizes he wants her there with him, needs the comfort he finds in her presence. He pauses, then runs his hand through the soft flow of her hair and presses a kiss on her forehead, like a promise"

I love this paragraph, it's beautiful.

Friday, 14 April 2006 07:39
Lovely bit of realistic angst, hisgoodgirl. Very spot-on for the two of them to be having problems dealing.

BEB
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 17 April 2006 17:06
<<“Gorramit, girl. I’m a mercenary, I do whatever I gotta, to get the job done. Sometimes that means killin’ people. Sometimes means I get hurt, maybe even killed myself.”

“Kaylee, this is what I do.”

Her eyes fill with tears as a sob tears free from her throat.

What he sees makes his chest ache and his breath rushes out of him like a decompressing airlock. He can’t bear her confusion, her fear. He hates his ineptness with words, how he always seems to say the wrong thing, can’t say what he really feels, hurts the one person he most wants to love.>>

Poor Jayne and poor Kaylee. Reality's a bitch, eh?

Saturday, 24 June 2006 14:16
*crosses fingers and clicks ruby slippers* they're gonna be okay, they're gonna be okay, they're gonna be okay...

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