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Leaps of Faith - 6

Wednesday, April 12, 2006

As Jayne and Kaylee struggle with their relationship, Jayne tries to set Mal straight about what they're headed into, and Mal sets up the job.

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Rating: PG-15, for references to violence.

Remarks: Jayne and Kaylee struggle to define their relationship amid plans for a shaky job. Set following my most recent story “The Birthday Gift”, after “Objects in Space”. Inara has departed from Serenity and things on board ship are getting more difficult. Click on my name to read the backstories.

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Leaps of Faith

Chapter Six

The bright rim of Aberdeen arcs across the black, nearly fillin’ Serenity’s bridge windows.

Mal steps through the doorway, tells Wash, “Wave Emerson. Let him know we’re in orbit. Keep it simple, but I wanna know what he’s got in mind. There’s a lot of farmers down there and I don’t reckon on havin’ this deal go down where innocent folk are like to get caught up in it.”

Jayne pokes his head into the bridge. “Look, Mal, I need to have a word with ya. Got a minute?” The merc gestures toward the corridor with a tilt of his head.

Mal pats Wash’s shoulder. “Holler if you need me.” He follows Jayne out into the corridor.

The big man is obviously tense, fidgety. “You know I ain’t felt right about this job since the get-go.”

The Captain nods.

“We been gorram lucky so far. Got the goods off Santo clean, ain’t even seen a hint of any Alliance patrols. But luck’s got a way a bein’ fickle and I just wanna make sure you know what kinda guy we’re dealin’ with here.”

Mal sets his jaw. “I take it you got some personal history with the man I might need to know about, so I’m listenin’.”

Jayne goes on, ”Couple a years back, I done a bank job with Emerson an’ another guy. Equal split a the take. Day before payday in a little company town, so bank’s full a coin. You know, just get in, scare the hell outta

Comments
Wednesday, 12 April 2006 21:44
uh oh, Jayne's been a bad boy! Looks like trouble comin' round to bite them in the ass! Don't hurt him too bad S.
Wednesday, 12 April 2006 23:07
Gotta back sweetserendipity here...Emerson's gonna find out Jayne's part of the crew and something is gonna go down. And Kaylee's gonna freak, alerting Simon he's missed the boat....yeah, fun times;)

BEB
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 13 April 2006 02:13
GULP! I'm going to just think good thoughts... like maybe Jayne will take care of this Emmerson guy for good.

As for Kaylee, life with a criminal is never easy. She has big decisions to make. However, it isn't like she hasn't been on Serenity! I mean, she may not go on the jobs be she knows the score. I think she can adjust. She and Jayne are just meant to be.

Oh, and this is Reenie not caring to log in.
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 13 April 2006 04:16
Hi! Ignore that Anonymous thingy, it's really Canton Heroine, sneaking in for her fic fix while the bossman is looking the other way. Shh...

Emerson seems the sort to hold a grudge, and I don't see that boding well for our merc. This job's got 'trouble' stamped all over it. Odd that it's taken Kaylee this long to figure that out, considering that none of Mal's jobs ever go smooth.

On the edge of my seat here. Write more soon.
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 13 April 2006 06:50
I am so with you on this one. It's...fanastic and sweet and I love the angst. Way more than I love the smut.

Rinny
Thursday, 13 April 2006 12:20
Hey Guys, yeah, Kaylee knows Mal sets up shaky jobs and accepts that they're crooks and that people shoot at them. It's one thing to accept that when you're just "hookin' up" with someone, and another altogether if you're starting to fall hook, line and sinker, yes?

Keep on readin'!
Thursday, 13 April 2006 12:53
Your right there hisgoodgirl it's different when you love someone.

Love this chapter. Emerson is going to cause real trouble I think.

Can't wait to read more, soon I hope?
Thursday, 13 April 2006 13:01
oooh, keep writing. I'm waiting....don't hurt anyone to badly, okay?
Thursday, 13 April 2006 14:11
i'm glad I'm not the only one who sneaks in fic fixes!

Keep writing, it's been great so far.
Saturday, 24 June 2006 13:39
don't hurt jayne too bad!!

b

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