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Crashing Through - Chapter 1

Wednesday, April 12, 2006

Three Hours Earlier...

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 1707    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Hey, thanks so much to everyone who read the first part. I appreciate the support. I wasn't gonna post this so soon, but I figured it was hard to tell if you wanted to keep reading or not just from that little prologue, so here's a little more to help you make up your minds. It's a bit shorter than I usually like my chapters, but oh well.

Thanks again!

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Chapter 1

Three Hours Earlier

Wash carefully drove the mule through the crowded streets of Corinth’s open-air marketplace, trying to avoid people, animals, and everything else. The sun was warm on his face and arms and his lips had settled into a comfortable smile. The Black was his home, it called to his soul, but that didn’t mean he didn’t like a good day planetside, mingling with people and enjoying the sights and sounds and smells. Well, most of the smells…

He had at least a couple hours before he was needed back on the ship, so he took his time with the purchases. Their last job had been one of the highly illegal kind which made for bad blood pressure while doing it, but nice payoffs when done. For the first time in a long while, they had real coin, and Mal had told him to splurge a little and go for some of that, what did people call it…oh yeah, real food.

Who knew shopping for little green vegetables could be so much fun?

Once he’d bought all the nice, fresh, yummy things he dared, including using a little of his own coin to get Kaylee a few of those strawberries he knew she loved so much, Wash moved on to the more practical, mundane parts of the shopping. He bought a case of protein, just to be safe, arranged for someone to stop by and top off Serenity’s water tanks, and grabbed the other stuff they were running low on like shampoo, laundry detergent, band-aids… Finally, after fifteen minutes of serious haggling, he added the two engine parts and the new screen for his console to the stack of purchases on his mule and surveyed the sight with satisfaction.

Yup, he done good.

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Comments
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 12 April 2006 01:21
Top notch!

Keep it coming!
Wednesday, 12 April 2006 05:20
Very good! I wonder who's got him... Write more soon! Um... please?
Wednesday, 12 April 2006 09:03
Huh....Wash's been captured again....I think it's time for some thrilling observational comedy from our favourite pilot in an attempt to avoid a beating or something;)

BEB
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 17 April 2006 04:43
I love it! Not enough wash centric stories out there.....you know pre- serenity....I read lots which focased on the after dyin part.....but ot to many happy.....well hes been kidnapped, but he aint dead and no ones angstin yet....aw hell I love this story and Id be more than just a mite sad if you dont keep it up. I look foward to see'n the next part, soon.
Tuesday, 25 April 2006 20:57
hm... appears i forgot to comment on this one. well i loved it so just thought id tell you now! well done! and make the pain stop soon... poor wash =(

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