Nearly there I promise...I'm just having problems with the finale! ______________________________________________
Gorram it!” yelled an exasperated mercenary, the iron bar catchin’ him fair across the stomach.
“Jayne” Kaylee’s voice shook as he pushed her behind him, him and the Captain steppin’ smoothly in front of her, guns pointin’ at her pursuers.
“Take another step ‘n’ you die.”
Of course thought the Captain as he ducked behind the alley wall when the thugs opened fire, things could never go smooth. Though with the mood Jayne was in the fight didn’t last long, ending with him, Jayne and Kaylee still standing and everyone else dead.
After all that gunfire, the law would be here any minute; he turned to his companions, “let’s get….”
Neither of them were listening to him, Jayne hadn’t even gone over to check his victims; they were both just standing staring at each other.
Mal heard a clonk as Kaylee flung herself onto Jayne’s chest, her cast hitting him on the head, arms choking him with a stranglehold around his neck. It looked like she was trying to get close enough to burrow under his skin. Jayne dropped his weapons crushed Kaylee against his body and buried his face in her hair.
Mal didn’t think he was gonna get them apart any time soon, but he wanted to get back to Serenity, there were still crowds around, some of them more dangerous than the last bunch, and his merc was a mite distracted.
He picked up the fallen guns, cleared his throat for the fourth time and risked touching the volatile mercenary on the shoulder.
“Jayne put Kaylee down; we gotta get out of here.”
Jayne reluctantly let Kaylee slide to the ground twining his fingers with hers as they started to walk.
Kaylee lent as close to him as she could as they walked, needin’ his warmth, needin’ to reassure herself he wasn’t hurt.
“Did Simon get back alright, did he tell ya where I was?”
Thinking of how they’d left the doctor; the Captain belatedly realised how his actions may have appeared to Simon. But
love that Jayne hasn't realized he dropped his guns
and Wash is so cute, amending his comparison b/c of Zoe
can't wait to read the next part about what happens in Jayne's bunk!
oh, and I love that image of Jayne and Mal coming to Kaylee's rescue, stepping btwn her and the bad guys - love those two!
I loooove the part in this chapter when Mal makes the comment about Jayne dropping his guns. Telling, indeed.
This was worth waiting for.
Thanks for a great start to my morning!!
And Mal's right...if Jayne hasn't noticed he dropped his guns yet, he's really focused on Kaylee. Though you have to wonder about his feelings for his guns when he tried to trade Vera for YoSaffBridge...
BEB
I am soo glad that Kaylee is finaly going to make things happen,mind you if you wanted to put it off for a little more I would gladly read what ever you gave us.
LOL
I knew that it was Jayne that got Clubbed but until I actualy read it I was hoping that it was Simon. He lost Kaylee he deserves whatever he get's.
I can't wait for more.
I haven't logged on, but I just had to comment on this chapter - which I loved. Especially the Jayne and Kaylee staring at each other moment after the rescue, and them holding hands on the way back to Serenity.
Also, is it bad that when Simon smirked at Jayne over Kaylee's shoulder, wanted to shoot him again?
No? Didn't think so.
So now that they're both half-nekkid in Jayne's bunk, I guessin' there's a happy ending coming up. If so, I can wait for as long as it takes.
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