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Thinking things through : Part fifteen

Sunday, April 9, 2006

Jayne and the Captain find Kaylee

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Nearly there I promise...I'm just having problems with the finale! ______________________________________________

Gorram it!” yelled an exasperated mercenary, the iron bar catchin’ him fair across the stomach.

“Jayne” Kaylee’s voice shook as he pushed her behind him, him and the Captain steppin’ smoothly in front of her, guns pointin’ at her pursuers.

“Take another step ‘n’ you die.”

Of course thought the Captain as he ducked behind the alley wall when the thugs opened fire, things could never go smooth. Though with the mood Jayne was in the fight didn’t last long, ending with him, Jayne and Kaylee still standing and everyone else dead.

After all that gunfire, the law would be here any minute; he turned to his companions, “let’s get….”

Neither of them were listening to him, Jayne hadn’t even gone over to check his victims; they were both just standing staring at each other.

Mal heard a clonk as Kaylee flung herself onto Jayne’s chest, her cast hitting him on the head, arms choking him with a stranglehold around his neck. It looked like she was trying to get close enough to burrow under his skin. Jayne dropped his weapons crushed Kaylee against his body and buried his face in her hair.

Mal didn’t think he was gonna get them apart any time soon, but he wanted to get back to Serenity, there were still crowds around, some of them more dangerous than the last bunch, and his merc was a mite distracted.

He picked up the fallen guns, cleared his throat for the fourth time and risked touching the volatile mercenary on the shoulder.

“Jayne put Kaylee down; we gotta get out of here.”

Jayne reluctantly let Kaylee slide to the ground twining his fingers with hers as they started to walk.

Kaylee lent as close to him as she could as they walked, needin’ his warmth, needin’ to reassure herself he wasn’t hurt.

“Did Simon get back alright, did he tell ya where I was?”

Thinking of how they’d left the doctor; the Captain belatedly realised how his actions may have appeared to Simon. But

Comments
Sunday, 09 April 2006 13:09
yay! adorable

love that Jayne hasn't realized he dropped his guns

and Wash is so cute, amending his comparison b/c of Zoe

can't wait to read the next part about what happens in Jayne's bunk!

oh, and I love that image of Jayne and Mal coming to Kaylee's rescue, stepping btwn her and the bad guys - love those two!
Sunday, 09 April 2006 13:45
I like it when Mal joins Jayne concerning the protection of Kaylee. I think that is very true to character. Mal may respect Simon, but if Simon put Kaylee in danger Mal would have no patience for that.

I loooove the part in this chapter when Mal makes the comment about Jayne dropping his guns. Telling, indeed.

This was worth waiting for.
Sunday, 09 April 2006 16:13
You know it is love when Jayne thinks of Kaylee before his guns.
Thanks for a great start to my morning!!
Sunday, 09 April 2006 16:44
Yep, another great chapter in the saga!
Sunday, 09 April 2006 20:26
Guess Vera gonna be awful jealous now that Jayne's got a new lady to look after;)

And Mal's right...if Jayne hasn't noticed he dropped his guns yet, he's really focused on Kaylee. Though you have to wonder about his feelings for his guns when he tried to trade Vera for YoSaffBridge...

BEB
DARKANGELLOVESFIREFLY
Monday, 10 April 2006 08:11
How sweet was that!?!?!?!!!!!

I am soo glad that Kaylee is finaly going to make things happen,mind you if you wanted to put it off for a little more I would gladly read what ever you gave us.

LOL

I knew that it was Jayne that got Clubbed but until I actualy read it I was hoping that it was Simon. He lost Kaylee he deserves whatever he get's.

I can't wait for more.
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 10 April 2006 09:46
Hi. It's me, Canton Heroine. *waves*

I haven't logged on, but I just had to comment on this chapter - which I loved. Especially the Jayne and Kaylee staring at each other moment after the rescue, and them holding hands on the way back to Serenity.

Also, is it bad that when Simon smirked at Jayne over Kaylee's shoulder, wanted to shoot him again?
No? Didn't think so.

So now that they're both half-nekkid in Jayne's bunk, I guessin' there's a happy ending coming up. If so, I can wait for as long as it takes.
Sunday, 23 April 2006 17:40
squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!! *picks up fic and dances round in a circle* i LOOOOOOOOOOOOVE you!!!!

b
Saturday, 06 May 2006 12:19
Nooooo!! Where's the last chapter? Have just found this fic today and read it right through...love it. Love Jayne and Kaylee totally into each other and oblivious to the riot going on around them!! Please update soon, please!!!

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