There is an epilogue to this story. It was really too dark to leave in this chapter as I think it would have changed the tone of this story. I'll post it tomorrow.
The 'honeymoon' will be its own separate story as I didn't want to include it here.
The vows were the hardest thing I've ever done. And they were re-written more times than I care to admit.
Thanks to TamSibling for content suggestions. If you liked them, blame her, if you didn't, blame her too! Hee!
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Chapter 2
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Mal caught Inara’s eyes over Simon’s shoulder as the Shepherd stepped forward and began to speak. The unmistakable love radiating from the beautiful woman caused him to swallow convulsively. He loved her; every bit as much as Simon loved Kaylee.
When Inara smiled, he felt his heart thud sharply against his chest and then she looked away, at Kaylee and Simon, giving Simon a kind, encouraging smile as he prepared to say his vows.
Simon held Kaylee’s hands in his own and stared into her lovely eyes. He was so nervous. He wasn’t certain how he would ever make it through this. But as he opened his mouth to speak, the words, for the first time in his life, came out just the way he had memorized them.
"I never planned – anything. I always thought my life would be on Osiris, in the hospital, day in and day out, saving lives. I never knew that life wasn't enough, until I met you. I never thought I could be happy living on a ship traveling through the Black, living with that kind of uncertainty, until I met you.” His voice shook, but it was filled with such warmth and emotion, those fortunate to witness this moment could only hold their breath.
“And I certainly never planned to fall in love. But you, you captured my heart from the moment you turned that big, bright smile on me. And now, what I want more than anything is to make you smile like that for the rest of your life." He squeezed her hands as they trembled. His blue, blue eyes burned into her, through her, making her stifle a sob as
and okay, mal and inara--so so pretty. i loved it!
~ kaynara
I love the vows and I think you've got the perfect amount of emotion here. You're not being clichè, it's just amazing. I love everyone's little bits and insights here, just the characterization and the pace at which the story moves.
Amazing!
Keep it up, I can't wait to read more!
-wingedraksha, too lazy to sign in
This is something truly beautiful, Leiasky. I can just see these scenes playing out on screen (either type...I ain't picky). And Simon's vows....pitch perfect I think for someone like Simon at that stage in his life:)
River....this girl deserves so much for all the suffering she has gone through and is going through now:( All the pain and uncertainty of not knowing just when the hidden enemy will strike until the last possible moment....definitely Whedonesque in its tone:D
But I have to chime in with Leighkohl..the Mal/Inara scene at the end just stole the whole thing:) This is the payoff a lot of Browncoats have wanted to see play our somewhere canonical for ages! And Inara's reaction...so in character and so heartbreaking too: love of a good man or the life she chose and trained for. Plus I really loved how you had her snap at Mal for his usual habit of bursting right in....even love can't kill the banter;)
BEB
Mal/Inara GUH finally finally finally... holy crap and stuff... GUH
Can't wait for the angst so it can be fairly over and get back to the good smuttin'! lol Love you tons, whether you write happy smut or angst.
<3 JanaFae
Cliomuse
Again with the typical Jayne.
River's vision/darkness is definitely something I am looking forward to, and decorating Jayne with napkins is just funny.
Yay also for Mal/Inara.
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