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The Tattoo

Saturday, March 13, 2004

Kaylee gets a tattoo, Jayne helps out.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3761    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Disclaimer: Characters do not belong to me, they are the property of Joss Whedon, Mutant Enemy and Fox

Just a short, fun, mostly fluffy bit of Kaylee and Jayne. Got the idea after seeing Jewell's lower back tattoo show up in "The Message", just couldn't get the idea of Kaylee having one out of my head after that.

Feedback is MOST welcome.

Takes place shortly after "War Stories"

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Kaylee lay stretched out on her tummy, her head resting on her arms...wonderin' how Jayne'd talked her into this.

It'd seemed like such a good idea back at the bar. They'd been drinkin' and celebrating gettin' the Cap'n an' Wash back. Had even managed to make some money by sellin' the goods Niska's men had left behind *she shuddered a little at the thought* so everyone but Inara, Simon and River'd gone to have a little drink. The Cap'n, Zoë an' Wash'd gone back to Serenity after only a couple drinks, jus' enough to make 'em a little tipsy an' all. Her'n Jayne had stayed behind for a few more.

*she gave a slight hiss of pain as the needle punctured skin*

Jayne'd started in teasing her how "virtuous" she'd gotten since the Doc had show up. Always amazed her how Jayne could pop out with those big words at the oddest times. He'd said she'd forgotten how ta have fun an' all. That'd stung a bit, heck, weren't no one on Serenity could have more fun then she could. So when he'd joked that now that she'd been in her first fight she'd have'ta get a tattoo she'd said sure thing, anytime. Wasn't 'bout to admit to him that she'd cowered in the corner an' let River take her gun. *shoved the memory of River's words after back* It was bad enough her knowin' how she'd let them all down, didn't want nobody else findin' out about it.

*she felt her teeth grind as the needle scraped across her back*

Jayne chuckled softly down at her, "Told ya it'd hurt like a sonofabitch gettin' it there" he sa

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 13 March 2004 03:23
I luv it! Any chance of a continuation?
I don't want it to end yet.
Saturday, 13 March 2004 04:08
That's wonderful! It's the tattoo we see on The Message, isn't it? What a great little story.
Saturday, 13 March 2004 04:47
Really nice to see Jayne portrayed as grumpy and sweet at the same time w/out getting sugary! Can't wait to see Simon's reaction:)
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 13 March 2004 07:12
Oh, you really captured Kaylee. And Jayne and the dialect and the...I can go on and on. Damn, very good! It would be nice to see a sequel...with Kaylee showing off the tattoo. Simon's face... priceless.

Cassandrae
Saturday, 13 March 2004 21:47
Saint Jayne, yes, it is the tattoo we see in The Message. :-)

This was just meant to be a little, one shot piece of Kaylee fluff. However, now I am starting to hear Simon wanting to say his piece so there may be more... if I can get it to come out right without spoiling things. To be honest, I am so darn proud of how this one turned out I am a little scared about messing with it...LOL

Thank you all for the positive feedback.
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 15 March 2004 20:43
Completely enjoyed the 'fluff'. I agree with the others, would be fun to read Simon's reaction.

Good Job!
Monday, 15 March 2004 22:46
woo hoo! really enjoyed that one
Wednesday, 17 March 2004 11:21
Lovely, lovely, lovely. Missing Firefly makes me so wretched sometimes. And then a happy, fluffy and characterful fanfic like this comes along and puts a big ol' grin on my face. Cheers!
Monday, 24 January 2005 20:47
I'm not a Jayne/Kaylee shipper, but damn that was good. Then I realized Neroli had written it: I've been reading all your fics the past few days (I'm having a wicked Jayne fanfic craving). There's not one I didn't enjoy.
JAZMYN
Saturday, 26 February 2005 11:55
omg u have to write more plz jazz
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 17 February 2006 19:57
Oh, I hope this isn't the beginning of a Jayne/Kaylee thing....I'm SO not a fan of that pairing.

Would love to see Simon's reaction to her tat tho... can imagine him tracing it with those delicate fingers of his....

leiasky (too lazy to log in)
Saturday, 24 February 2007 04:15
Sequel!

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