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Delta Rain - Torrents chapter 5

Friday, October 21, 2005

The crew starts making plans to rescue Simon and Jayne.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3786    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Disclaimer: Characters do not belong to me, they are the property of Joss Whedon, Mutant Enemy and Fox.

Feedback is always welcome.

Takes place shortly after the series ended and about a month after the events in Delta Rain.

Thanks to CassieE, bugchicklv and jebbypal for the beta and everyone else for their patience. Also, I think this now counts as an AU, I won't be incorporating the BDM in so it's all series based.

Chinese translations:

Wuo de ma: Mother of Jesus

shénme?: what?

fèi huà: garbage

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Mal studied Monty while he tried to decide how much to tell the older man about his situation. He’d long suspected that Monty still had ties to the small pockets of Independents that had gone underground, refusing to admit they had been defeated.

If he was right then Monty may already know more about the program that River had been in, might even have ties to those that had gotten her out. Ever since Simon had first told them his story on getting River out Mal had suspected that the group that helped him was one of these surviving cells.

If he was wrong though, if he was wrong he might be turning River and Simon over to someone else that might betray them. Not that he didn’t trust Monty not too, but it wasn’t his decision to make. It should be Simon sitting here deciding if he could trust this man with his secret, not Mal.

“Spit it out Reynolds. Much as I love the hospitality, I know ya didn’t invite me over for tea.” Monty gestured at his neglected teacup for emphasis.

Mal pinched the bridge of his nose and took a deep sigh before answering. “No Monty, I didn’t. Two of my crew are in danger and I was hoping you might be able to help me get them out.”

“Which two?” Monty asked, his eyes sharpening with interest.

“Jayne, who you’ve met, and my Doctor.”

“You got yourself a doctor?” The way Monty’s eyes widened in shock almost made letting that piece of information drop worth it.

“Picked him up a while back,” Mal continued, “the boy needed to avoid Alliance

Comments
BELLONA
Friday, 21 October 2005 16:50
FINALLY!!! been waitin' a long time for this...AN' IT ROCKED!!!!

love it!!! PLEASE don't make us wait too long for the next one!!!
Friday, 21 October 2005 17:25
Great stuff, this has been a LONG time coming. Please be good and don't keep us waiting so long for our next fix, *dong ma*? Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 21 October 2005 19:00
Awesome! So glad you continued this series. Its one of my absolute favorite Rayne stories! Please, please write more soon.
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 22 October 2005 03:27
SHINY!!! I am soooo happy to updated this story. It's one of my absolute favorites!!! been waiting a long time!
thanks so much!! look forward to more
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 07 November 2005 03:53
You're back :)
Keep Writing!!!
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 08 November 2005 15:31
Wow, this is a great story. Please continue.
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 17 November 2005 03:10
Please write more to this story It is amazing and I want River and Jayne to finally be together body and soul but I have to admit you hold out and leave cliffhangers as good as Joss Whedon does! Please contiune they story asap!!
Wednesday, 21 December 2005 00:18
more more more please sir
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 28 December 2005 13:20
Any plans to finish??
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 29 December 2005 05:53
please keep writing..you're awesome.
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 29 December 2005 21:22
Great. The characters continue to pop--continue to surprise and delight me. Please continue writing. I really love the Jayne/River story and you've made it so...intriguing, eloquent...words escape me. -Simma
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 03 January 2006 04:35
wonderful. I'm gonna take a little leap of faith here and hop on the "Please write some more soon." boat. Else'n I'll sick Vera on you.

-Sam
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 17 February 2006 14:42
Fabulous!!! Am a huge Rayne shipper, and your writing's incredible. Pleeeease tell me you'll be posting another chapter soon?
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 17 February 2006 19:52
I just found this story and am really liking it. I much prefer S/K but this is actually working for me. Hope you post another chapter soon.

leiasky (too lazy to log in)
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 24 March 2006 08:50
I am eagerly awaiting the next part. I just read Delta Rain as well and loved it.
Sunday, 26 March 2006 05:39
Wow, over a year since the last update. This gives me hope for some of the (many) other unfinished WIP's out there. Will keep waiting patiently for any more chapters that you way be working on.
WINTERHART
Wednesday, 29 March 2006 06:16
Oh, please please please write more of this? It's awful, this story being so goshdarned good and then not knowing the ending...!

You write so very well; we just need more!
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 12 April 2006 17:17
I have to agreee with everyone else. Please don't make us wait too much longer for an ending. Or at least some sexin'. Keep it up!!!
SUVIE
Wednesday, 11 July 2007 19:57
Any chance of another chapter? Story wrap up? Really have missed your wonderful story telling ability.

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