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BOOK OF DAYS SERIES: #15. "Surprise"

Saturday, March 18, 2006

Mal wakes up with Inara and Simon wakes up to Kaylee’s little – surprise. NC-17. Simon/Kaylee. Mal/Inara. 15th story in a series.

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Title: Surprise

Rating: NC-17

Synopsis: Mal wakes up with Inara and Simon wakes up to Kaylee’s little – surprise.

Timeline: Takes place 4 months after Serenity, the movie and right after the fic ‘ Celebration’.

Notes: Next part of a series beginning with : And So It Begins, Kiss Me, Coming Together, Tell Me, What’s Proper?, Tears ,Peekaboo, Impatient, Waking Up is Hard to Do, The Talk, I See You, Exhaustion,.Moving Day, Celebration, Surprise

Disclaimer: This story is not meant to infringe on the copyright of any person or company related to the trademarked characters and situations depicted in the Serenity movie or Firefly series. I make no money from this. Only done for fun – and a desperate craving to have more stories told about this wonderful ‘verse Joss Whedon created.

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Mal rolled over, groaning as his senses took in the overwhelming feminine scent of the pillow on which, up until a few moments ago, his face had been buried. He opened his eyes and squinted up at the ceiling, soft wisps of material catching the corner of his eye. He sat up suddenly, and then clutched his swimming head. His vision blurred for a moment and he blinked rapidly to clear it.

“Good morning.” Inara said with a smile.

Mal squinted at her and, for a moment longer than it would have been if he weren’t suffering from a hangover, let his eyes travel down the length of her. He swallowed reflexively and rubbed his head. “What the hell happened?”

Inara sat beside him on the bed. “You drank a little too much last night.”

“That much is obvious.”

“You weren’t going to make it down to your bunk so I let you sleep here rather than on a cold grate in the middle of a hallway.”

“How – kind.”

Inara shoved the cup into his hands. “Oh drink this ya big baby. You’re not dying.”

“Feels like someone split my head in two.”

“I’m sure Simon can give you something for the pain.” The amusement in Inara’s voice was evident and Mal scowled at her.

“Right. It’ll take him all mornin’ to

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 18 March 2006 17:32
Woah, good fanfic :)
Saturday, 18 March 2006 18:41
GUH. Gorgeous.

"He'll never see it coming." Hee! Gotta love River.
Saturday, 18 March 2006 19:50
Um, River's not going to hurt her brother, is she? I hate it when she gets too cryptic to understand - but then again that's part of the fun of her.

You write the smut so well - kudos! Are we seeing a baby carriage in the near future?
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 18 March 2006 22:00
Jeez, that was the best yet!!! River, that devious lil'imp! (Or whatever the good gorram Hell she is)
Sunday, 19 March 2006 00:53
LOL @ ""“Want to see Simon lose his mind with a miniature version of him running around the ship.”"

Heehee! Another great job! MMM..Blindfolds...
Sunday, 19 March 2006 03:39
*muxh drooling and praise for the help you gave as well as the gorgeous guh-worthy fics you continue to create* love ya tons sweetie :)
Sunday, 19 March 2006 06:03
>River's not going to hurt her brother

Hurt no. Tease mercilessly? Every chance she gets!

>Are we seeing a baby carriage in the near future?

Near? No.

> I hate it when she gets too cryptic to understand

She wasn't necessarily talking about a baby :)

I just love writing bratty River. I'm glad she comes across so well.
Sunday, 19 March 2006 07:33
“Right. It’ll take him all mornin’ to pry himself outta lil’ Kaylee’s –“

“Mal!” Inara thought she could hear a jealous undertone in his voice.

“Arms! Was gonna say arms!”

-haha love it. thanks for the mal/inara, leiasky!!!

~kaynara
Sunday, 19 March 2006 13:33
Loved it. Really loved it!
Sunday, 19 March 2006 17:01
Loved River's comment about Simon, "He won't even see it coming". Does this mean he got Kaylee pregannt? And Mal and Inara, all the miss steps continue. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Sunday, 19 March 2006 17:18
>Does this mean he got Kaylee pregannt?

Answered that one above :)

>And Mal and Inara, all the miss steps continue.

Oh yes, I just love that about their - relationship.

Kaynara - the Mal/Inara was just for you since you wanted more:) There will be more. It'll be buried in all the S/K fun (because they are the easiest for me to write) but it'll be there.
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 20 March 2006 23:07
River favored Zoe with a creepy, crazy look that wiped the smile off the older woman’s face. “He won’t even see it coming.”
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I love this line! So in character. Brava!
Thursday, 23 March 2006 05:54
“If Simon thought I was a brat. Wait until there is a miniature version of him running around the ship. He'll lose his mind.” She clasped her hands with glee. "I can't wait!"

LMAO
Friday, 19 May 2006 21:42
Favorite Line:
“God girl. I’m glad you’re not my little sister. You’re just too evil for words.”

And Zoe threatening to remove Jayne's thumbs and forefingers rocks. :)

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