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Family Dynamics - Part XII - Conclusion

Saturday, March 18, 2006

River is back on board, but is that enough? Simon and Kaylee are again stiff with each other and Inara takes the final step.

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A/N: Thanks to all who read. As a reminder, I ascertain that the beginning of the BDM makes a lot more sense if it is depicting a second rescue attempt of River, not replaying the first one we were never privy too. It's best to read Part XI if you still have questions on this.

Thanks to Leiasky for her thoughts and feedback!

I don't own the 'verse, I just play in it.

Enjoy all.

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As soon as Simon felt the lift jolt into place, absorbing itself back into Serenity’s hull, he breathed a deep sigh of relief. Kneeling next to his trembling sister, Simon pushed some of her hair out of her eyes and lifted her chin up to look at him. “River,” he questioned quietly, searching her gaze for any sign of recognition. “River, it’s me, Simon. Can you hear me?”

Slowly and with great difficulty, River rescued her brain from the dark and desolate place the Alliance had forced it to. In a rush the sights and sounds around her came flooding in: the cold metal beneath her skin, the sharp pain in her head and torso, the fear and anxiety filling her heart; the loving and comforting face that was only inches from her own.

“Simon,” she questioned with a voice not nearly as strong as it had been inside the hospital. He nodded once, and she wrapped trembling arms around his neck, burying her face into his shoulder as huge sobs wracked her body. “Home now,” she questioned, her voice muffled against his shirt.

Fighting back his own tears, Simon held her tightly, vowing silently to never let her go again. “Yes, mei mei, we’re home.”

Not a second after the words were spoken, Simon felt her body go limp, the adrenaline in her system finally dissipating, allowing her body to shut down and start to work on repairing all the damage the drugs had done. Pulling her back from him, Simon quickly took her pulse and checked her breathing. She would be all right; she was just too exhausted to keep her eyes open a second longer.

Looking up, Simon took in the concerned faces staring down at them.

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 18 March 2006 04:53
Excellent work all around. I especially appreciate how you worked to dovetail this story with both the series and the movie. I'm very impressed with the imaginative solutions you came up with to cover the discrepencies between the series and the movie.

Again, awesome job.

-goblueguy
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 18 March 2006 05:16
That was a wonderful story! I too, like goblueguy, like the way you filled in the blanks that many of us had questions in regard to between the series and the film. I love your characterization and the way you exemplify Simon's sense of duty to his sister so well. You're absolutely brilliant and I can't wait for more works from you!

~Wanmei~
Saturday, 18 March 2006 05:26
Well done! You wove the story into the beginning of the events of the movie so very well!

Simon and Kaylee's emotions are well captured and I could see the end of your story fitting very well into the events of the film.

So - what's next?
Saturday, 18 March 2006 11:55
Very nicely linked together.

Almost Bittersweet in places but a good ending to an excellent fic.

Thanks for sharing.
Taya
Saturday, 18 March 2006 12:04
My heart was breaking about the middle, but you left us with a nice little glimmer of hope at the end. This was a lovely series and I can't wait to see what you have for us next!
Sunday, 19 March 2006 16:13
So Inara runs away again? Happy to have River back and hoping she will soon be her old self again. As for Kaylee and Simon it is coming, just a slow climb. But the view when they reach the top will be worth it. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 20 March 2006 01:13
this story has been terrific-
Love the way you portray Simon with dimension- ccb
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 22 March 2006 00:47
Im rutting glowing man, I loved this story from start to end, I loved how it linked the movie and the show togather... love love love :D great writing, plz give us more soon?
Thursday, 08 June 2006 14:47
Yay for Serenity being home, and the crew being much tighter than his blood family.

This line hit me particularly hard:

*Looking to Wash, she said, “You’re still here. I was hoping I’d get to see you again.”*

R.I.P. Wash, we miss and love you.

Good foreshadowing for the movie:

*She still awoke screaming in the middle of the night, still spewed out gibberish no one could understand, still could be a danger to herself and others around her.*

Yay also for Simon and Kaylee 'making up' at the end.
Thursday, 31 August 2006 05:37
Shiny
Friday, 24 November 2006 05:06
*sigh* now I remember why I save reading your stories as a treat to be treasured. This was a great series, I'm impressed that you were able to cover such ground while, for the most part, keeping with cannon. Big Damn Thank you for sharing it with us.

Note to the 700+ people who've read the story, comment people! It's the only way we get to keep reading these shiny fics.
FURIOUSROSE
Wednesday, 29 August 2007 21:15
Wonderful series. I absolutely enjoyed the journey. Love the way you write the characters (especially Simon and Kaylee). I can't stick with a story if the characters are all out whack. So kudos. Can't wait to read more from your 'verse.
Oh, and thanks for the kind words on my fic. Very much appreciated.
FURIOUSROSE
Wednesday, 29 August 2007 21:17
that was supposed to say "all out of whack" not "all out whack" haha. although it would be kinda fun to speak like that for a day. "damn thats whack!"
ok, anyways.... great series. off to read more!

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