Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Family Dynamics - Part X

Wednesday, March 15, 2006

River needs help and fast. The BDHs form a plan, but no one likes the final decision. Mal/Inara, Simon/Kaylee

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The tension in the room was almost suffocating. Regan had finished explaining the diagram to Gabriel a few minutes ago and her husband had not spoken a word the entire time. He had dropped her hands and she had again risen to stand back behind his chair, steadying herself on the tall back. She waited, her heart in her throat, for his reaction. The time dragged.

“How do you know this is true?” They were the first words he’d spoken and when he said them his voice was barely above a whisper.

“Because Simon told me it’s true. And I believe him.” Regan would not waver on that point ever again.

“He could have falsified this scan you know?” The accusation came as more of an afterthought than a conviction. Gabriel sank slowly back in his chair and rubbed a hand over his face.

“He didn’t. He told me that if you wanted to check the authenticity there are some scans you can run the data through. Some of the security sweeps you use at the office. He said that would verify the data.” Regan still waited on pins and needles, unable to tell which side of this her husband would ultimately fall on.

“And Simon is sure of this?”

Nodding, although he couldn’t see the gesture, Regan explained. “He is.”

When silence again fell between them, Regan waited as long as she could before pushing the issue. “Gabriel, River doesn’t have a lot of time. I need know if you’re going to help us.”

He swiveled slowly in the chair to examine his wife. She was still determined, showing more energy than he’d seen from her in quite some time. She had never shown a sign of weakness, all through the explanation of their daughter’s crippled brain scan. She truly believed what Simon had told her.

“I have to process this, Regan,” he said, his voice holding none of the fire he’d exhibited over the past few days. “Please leave me be.”

If Regan was offended by the brush off, she didn’t show it. She had been raised too properly for that. Instead, she strode out of the room, shutting the heavy doors behind her. On

Comments
Wednesday, 15 March 2006 05:42
Aww, now see...love the intimacy between Kaylee and Simon. It's so very sweet!

Knew mom and pop would come through. Hopefully they'll give Simon the money he needs!

Looking forward to the next chapter!
Wednesday, 15 March 2006 08:08
I can't wait to read the rescue attampt, and love the Simon/Kaylee as well!!!
Wednesday, 15 March 2006 10:09
Lovely scene here with Inara and some surprisingly accurate clarity of thought from Mal.

Well written as ever and interesting that you've chosen not to hate Simon and River's parents!
Wednesday, 15 March 2006 14:44
>... interesting that you've chosen not to hate Simon and River's parents!

I don't know if I don't "hate" them, but I definitely think they were products of their environment.

>... some suprisingly accurate clarity of thought from Mal.

Too surprising? I have this theory that Mal understands Inara more deeply than just about anyone because they are so similar. Mal feels things very deeply as well, it's evident in the way he feels about his crew, but he also keeps those feelings buried deep, for reasons we can guess at, but don't really know. I think that's one of things that endears Inara to him and vice versa. They are more similar than they want to admit, and it brings them together.

> ... love the intimacy between Kaylee and Simon

See, I think these moments can be much more "touching" than the other stuff!

Thanks for the comments guys! I can always rely on you for some good feedback.
Wednesday, 15 March 2006 15:42
Really enjoy this story. Please keep posting. I'm finding it harder and harder to find worthy stories to read. This has absolutely made my top 10 and it's not even finished yet.

Great job!!
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 15 March 2006 15:51
>I can't wait to read the rescue attempt!

Hmmm, it could be you've already "seen" it ...
Wednesday, 15 March 2006 15:51
That was me up there - grr argh!
Wednesday, 15 March 2006 16:01
>Hmmm, it could be you've already "seen" it ...


Ohhh!

This is how you're going to work in the movie and still keep Simon's original series explanation of someone ELSE getting River out the first time....

Am I write or totally off base?
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 15 March 2006 16:34
Everything I'd say has been said already. Excellent work, keep it up.

-goblueguy
Wednesday, 15 March 2006 18:56
If Leiasky's right then that is a very clever way to keep the continuity of the 'verse.

Also... when i said 'surprising clarity' earlier it was still in character and I thought it was nicely done!
Wednesday, 15 March 2006 19:15
>See, I think these moments can be much more "touching" than the other stuff!

Yes, they can be. And you've done a great job with all of those little intimate moments. I'm looking forward to more! :)

I do like to read the 'other' stuff too, though . . . :)

So, when do we get another chapter? You have demanding readers, write faster damnit! :)
Wednesday, 15 March 2006 19:22
You all need to chill out! Pulling the beginning of the movie together with the end of my story is proving a little difficult as I don't know how far to go from one to the other.

I'm working on it ... Patience you must learn.
Wednesday, 15 March 2006 19:31
Excellent! So glad that Papa Tam is going to come through for both River and Simon. Some lovely moments between Simon and Kaylee too. Now for some thrilling heroics! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 15 March 2006 22:13
>Pulling the beginning of the movie together with the end of my story is proving a little difficult as I don't know how far to go from one to the other.

Don't know how far to go? All the way, of course! 'Cause we know that's how far S/K get at the end of the film...hee:)
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 16 March 2006 03:22
Another brilliant chapter!

I love Simon's sense of duty to River, the way you write you capture it so well. It's so perfectly emotional.

Update soon!

~Wanmei~
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 16 March 2006 21:16
I stumbled my way upon this series today and spent my entire workday reading it (when I could break away).

Love.This.
Thursday, 08 June 2006 13:00
I like River and Simon having similar dreams at the same time, their connection is so strong even though they are apart.

Bout damn time his dad came around. Time for some thrilling heroics. :)
Thursday, 31 August 2006 05:31
This is gonna be good.
Friday, 24 November 2006 04:37
Everyone's already said what I had in mind as I was reading and with far more acuity than I can muster, so I'll just add my thanks for sharing your work with us and another 10 for your ratings.

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