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Family Dynamics - Part VIII

Sunday, March 12, 2006

Simon may be safe, but River is still not out of the woods. Mal wants to know where in the ruttin' h*ll Inara is with his shuttle. Simon/Kaylee

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Sorry for the delay ... life and all that other "reality" junk got in the way of my writing time. Enjoy and don't forget to leave feedback ...

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Inara’s shuttle wasn’t particularly well hidden, but it was registered legally and that immediately spared it from any unwanted attention. The three of them getting back to it wasn’t the problem; deciding what to do next was.

Simon had fallen, more than sat on Inara’s bed once they were inside, the exertion from walking such a far distance with shaky balance and a bruised head taking more out of him then he wanted to admit. Kaylee helped him lay back, removing his shoes and trying to situate him comfortably. Noticing the cut on his head had again started to bleed she left him for a moment and then returned to his side with a basin of water and a rag.

Simon was groggy and nearly passed out again. Kaylee gently pushed him into a semi-sitting position and wedged herself between the head of the bed and his back, placing the wet rag against the injured skin. Slowly, she pulled him back against her, her arm resting lightly on his chest and her cheek pressed to the top of his head. She whispered to him, things he couldn’t understand, but it was soothing nonetheless. And the feel of the damp cloth against his skin felt wonderful.

Simon closed his eyes and rested there for a moment, delighting in the soft touch of Kaylee’s hand resting over his heart; the feel of her breath in his hair as she tried to comfort him. Barely realizing what he was doing, Simon reached his own hand up to cover hers and he squeezed her fingers gently as a form of thanks. Liking the way it felt, Simon kept his hand over hers and she didn’t protest.

Inara came from the shuttle’s cockpit sure that they hadn’t been followed or spotted. The sight in front of her brought tears to her eyes. Kaylee sat with her back to the shuttle’s wall one leg curled under her and the other stretched out beside Simon’s sleeping form. Rocking him gently, Kaylee had wrapped an arm around h

Comments
Sunday, 12 March 2006 04:52
Okay people - you're rating my stuff, but not leaving comments? Come on, that's just cruel and unusual punishment to a fan-ficcer like myself.

If I say please will you give me feedback? How about pretty please? With cream and sugar on top?

:o)
Sunday, 12 March 2006 05:02
oooo... that was so sweet. I think i've already said this but i'll say it again. I LOVE THIS STORY!! keep it up!
Sunday, 12 March 2006 06:00
Oh, this was the best chapter yet. The intimacy between Simon and Kaylee was so well done...right down to the description of her rubbing his arm absentmindedly with her hand!

Ohh, and what kind of info is on that data stick...hmm..don't keep us waiting too long to find out!
Sunday, 12 March 2006 07:11
wait, Kaylee and Simon don't get intimate till Serenity. but isn't Wash uhhhhhhh....yeah
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 12 March 2006 07:34
I liked Mal and Zoe turning the tables on Stern and his thugs but I'm kind of worried about Simon contacting his folks for help. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Sunday, 12 March 2006 11:41
I like this lots. Wash's sarcastic and irritated comments at Mal felt especially right!

Don't keep us waiting too long until the next part!
Taya
Sunday, 12 March 2006 12:18
Awesome
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 12 March 2006 16:28
Excellent job.
Sunday, 12 March 2006 17:14
To BrowncoatCrusader -

This is pre-BDM. They're not "intimate" in the biblical sense, but there had to be some lead up.

Thanks for reading!
Sunday, 12 March 2006 19:17
I am so engrossed in this story! I can't wait to see where you go with this!
Sunday, 12 March 2006 22:07
>wait, Kaylee and Simon don't get intimate till Serenity

Intimacy doesn't have to be making love :)Kaylee holding Simon and him reaching up to grasp her hand was very intimate, especially when you consider their previous lack of contact.

TamSibling, is this story going to discount the movie? Or is it just a leadup to it?

Am looking forward to more intimate moments between my fav couple:)
Sunday, 12 March 2006 22:41
>Tilting and shaking the bag slightly, the memory stick slid right out into his hand.

Is it the data Simon saved after scanning River's brain in 'Ariel'?

Ohh, please post another chapter soon :)
Monday, 13 March 2006 00:59
Patience you must learn ...

Leiasky, this story will not discount the movie, just lead up to it as you said.

As a devout Whedonite, I cannot knowingly debunk pieces of Joss' canon, even though I may want to.

Now about that data stick ... we will wait and see!
Thursday, 08 June 2006 11:23
I really like the Mal/Zoe connection, the hand gestures and slight eye signals and such.

*It was an incident they would never discuss as Wash had felt the larger man’s hands grace his backside a bit too fervently.*

I'm sure it was only an accident, yeah, that's it. :)

Yay for Simon having the 3D neuroimager data handy to show his mom.
Friday, 24 November 2006 03:57
“I’ll be sure to thank Mal when I see him again for his foolishness and chauvinism.”
mwah ha ha Inara & Kaylee weren't the only ones laughing.

I loved the Silee although I'm a little unsure about how open Simon is about it since this is pre-BDM.

Okay I'm off to the next chapter, hoping that Regan is more clued in than her husband.

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