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Finding Our Way - Epilogue

Friday, March 10, 2006

Serenity lands on Persephone and that which was lost is found once again.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3986    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Thanks to everyone who stuck this out and continued reading. This is pretty long to be an Epilogue and though I did want the story to end with the last chapter (more dramatic that way!) I decided to post the true end to this little tale.

To TamSibling, congrats on figuring out the ‘come full circle thing’ which is exactly what I intended when writing this chapter.

Hope you all enjoyed reading this story as much as I enjoyed writing and sharing it with you.

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Epilogue

Serenity was a ghost ship. There was no laughter echoing through the halls, no pitter patter of tiny feet in huge combat boots. There was no gunfire, no shouting, no arguing, there was nothing but an eerie, uncomfortable silence. It was a metal shell gliding through space, much like the occupants who called the ship their home.

It had been a week since Simon had been taken away and not one single member of the crew could rightly admit that his loss hadn’t affected them. As much trouble as the stuffy doctor and his crazy sister had brought upon them, they were crew, they were family, and they’d had a place on the ship.

Mal, even at his crankiest, couldn’t ever admit to feeling so helpless. In the past, the ship had been filled with laughter, jokes, and a fair bit of ragging on their resident, uptight doctor. He was such a fun and easy mark. But now, as he walked through the empty hallways and looked at the solemn faces of those Simon had left behind, Mal couldn’t remember the last time he had felt so – lost.

Kaylee sat with Inara, as the Companion forced her to eat, pushed her to go on with her life. The young mechanic existed solely for her girl now. Serenity. Her baby; the love of her life - until she had met that stuffy Core doctor. The bright light of life was gone from her eyes, and with it had gone Serenity’s never-ending glow. Stupid shipboard relationships. Mal hated them even more now to see his lil’ Kaylee’s bright eyes dimmed because of a lost love.

He knew Kaylee had played back Simon’s m

Comments
Friday, 10 March 2006 01:12
I love you!!!!

Seriously. I've been in a funk all day over this story, and...you made me happy again.

I love you! And I love this story!! :-D

I'll talk more later once I get over the "OMG THIS IS THE HAPPIEST THING THAT'S HAPPENED TO ME ALL DAY!!" deal.
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 10 March 2006 01:12
THANK YOU!!! THANK YOU!!! THANK YOU!!! That made it all worthwhile!!!!
~ misskitten
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 10 March 2006 01:16
Woooooooo! Now I'm VERY glad you posted this (although I was half expecting it to be sad).

And now my wife is wondering why I'm grinning like an idiot.

ManicGiraffe
Friday, 10 March 2006 01:17
I liked River in this bit! Everything came full circle :D
Friday, 10 March 2006 01:45
Oooooh yay for happy endings! Very sweet and...happy. I'm too drunk to be witty.

More smut now?
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 10 March 2006 02:00
Thank you for letting us see the whole thing.

-goblueguy
Friday, 10 March 2006 02:17
river was sweet. she knew. and it was a relief to see her/kaylee's happiness (simon) restored. lol.
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 10 March 2006 03:48
You are amazing....a wonderful arc, a plunge to the depths and heights of emotion....why can't more people like you end up as screenwriters!
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 10 March 2006 03:58
Thank you for a terrific story. You had us so caught up with this terrific plot throughout the whole thing. I'm glad you stayed cool when everyone was wigging out over the possible ending. We are just really pleased you shared it with all of us. ccb
Friday, 10 March 2006 03:58
Awesome! I'm so glad that I was right. I was worried that maybe I was just being too hopeful!

Leiasky, I loved this story - even the smutty stuff. I actually had thought up a conversation today for this epilogue if it had gone the other way. It was very angsty with a very angry Kaylee railing against everyone and possibly leaving the ship. I'm glad I can save it for another occassion now.

Thanks for sharing this with us.
Friday, 10 March 2006 06:22
I knew everything would be fine.
Fantastic series.
Friday, 10 March 2006 08:49
Big hugs for sharing!!! Both endings are wonderful, but yes, I do like this one better(just because I am a big mushy puff!). Your storytelling did certainly cause an uproar, but that is a sign of excellent writing! Thanks for the great story and can't wait to read more of your postings(hopefully soon:D)!
Friday, 10 March 2006 10:13
One little story = one huge uproar.

All better now!

Great stuff!
Taya
Friday, 10 March 2006 14:00
OMG, this was the best cliffhanger I have ever read. Props for the cyro-chamber, I had a sneaking suspision about those drugs...lol, and keep it up!
Friday, 10 March 2006 14:10
Yay! Excellent cryo-chamber, happy Kaylee gets to snuggle and warm SImon up again.

Rippin' good story, thanks so much!

m4p
Friday, 10 March 2006 16:00
>I liked River in this bit! Everything came full circle :D

That was my intent all along, I just happened to enjoy the uproar ending the last chapter created.

>More smut now?

Good god. Some of my stuff does need a plot every so often! I've got 10 short stories all done that you'll just love. No, I'm not posting them all at once.

>You are amazing....a wonderful arc, a plunge to the depths and heights of emotion....

I think a story is successful if a reader feels that way. Thank you.

>why can't more people like you end up as screenwriters!

Because then there would be no need for fanfiction!
>I actually had thought up a conversation today for this epilogue if it had gone the other way

I'd love to hear about it :)

>Both endings are wonderful,

There really were not two endings.

>One little story = one huge uproar.

Yeah. Really came as a surprise to me that's for sure!

>Yay! happy Kaylee gets to snuggle and warm SImon up again.

Pretty much how the sequel starts . . . :)


Thanks everyone for the comments and I'm glad you enjoyed the story, even if it gave some of you heart failure to think Simon died :)
Friday, 10 March 2006 16:56
Hah! Knew it. This was really good. I enjoyed the way you ended the actual story, leaving us all hanging. It was a Joss thing to do. The epilogue is nice though. I like the full circle approach. You write so well.
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 10 March 2006 17:53
Although, I gotta throw one last thought in:

Despite the relief that Simon is back, both Kaylee and River were abused pretty badly with the drugging and the lying and the sneaking off despite promising otherwise. I can imagine there being some fallout from that somewhere down the line.

ManicGiraffe (who is too damn lazy to turn on the cookies and log in - but ironically, it took longer to type this explanation than to just do it)
WINTERHART
Saturday, 11 March 2006 17:12
*Squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!* YAY!
I was really dreading reading this since I was so very scared that Simon was dead, but I just had to know the end.
Thank you thank you thank you, for /such/ a fantastic story, and for posting am epilogue to explain things to people like me who clearly couldn't come to the right conclusion on their own ;)

I have a feeling that today will now be one of those where I wander around humming and smiling at inexplicable moments because of this...
You are fantastic!
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 12 March 2006 22:59
Oh, THANK YOU! Chapter 15 had left me seriously bummed. The Epilogue left me happy! A wonderful story overall.
Wednesday, 22 March 2006 05:51
Hehehe so glad I was right, I love your writing, but hell, you can't go off and kill the doctor on us, not now that he is sexin lil' Kaylee, so glad I don't have to hunt ya down and hurt ya :P
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 10 April 2006 12:37
Hello there (again),

I commented on the last chapter just before I read this, and while I have to say the points I made about Mal or somebody just shooting Adrian after he had lifted the landlock are totally still relevent, this was a great ending.

It probably saved your skin too, since it sounded like some of the people who commented would have been out for blood if the good Doctor had really been shuffled off. That kind of thing can be forgiven in a TV series, where real people play the characters and sometimes have to leave the show, but this is all written and you (and more to the point, we, the readers) have no one to blame but yourself when someone is killed.

Not to worry. Everything ends to our satisfaction, and we look forward to many more well written tales of thrilling heroics during which Simon doesn't die.

Seriously though, great work. Thanks.
Friday, 26 May 2006 17:43
*Fat lot of good his God had done for Simon.*

My feelings on God-fearing religions in general.

Yay for being at least partially right, though I didn't get that there were cryo containers in the room Simon was led into (I did have my suspicions).

Another excellent story, Leia, and I am all but done with everything you have ever written.

I wonder if I would be shunned even more for writing a S/K/R fic. Hmmmm...
Sunday, 28 May 2006 00:45
omg...thank god!!!! i was ready to kill someone after the last fic. i mean it was the most amazing ending in the world (the last one) but damn! i was just like no...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and a bunch of other explatives...*takes a deep deep deep breath* omg, i'm so crying right now. whew....omg...omg...i can't think of anything to say now except for omg...thank you! thank you so much for posting this, or else i would have thought simon was dead and gone and...that's not a good thing to say the least. THANK YOU! great story, great ending, just great!
Saturday, 01 July 2006 02:57
Posted by TamSibling:

>It was very angsty with a very angry Kaylee railing against everyone and possibly leaving the ship. I'm glad I can save it for another occassion now.


And she has finally written that story. The first in the Trilogy of stories that begins with the idea above is called 'A New Life.' Check it out. It's excellent.
Wednesday, 08 August 2007 08:56
Fantastic story! Read the whole thing this afternoon. I notice you comment on some of my stuff so I thought I'd check out yours. This was heartbreaking and brought tears to my eyes more than once. I love the Simon/Kaylee romance and this was a great way to see it take off in that direction we had all hoped it would go during the short run of the show. And a very erotic way, at that! Mal was quite the orge and then he had to eat a lot of crow, which looked good on him. Simon's speech at the dinner table was brillient and encompassed all his fears and feelings in one. Poor guy was just torn apart. I liked the conclusion and I had a strong feeling it was a room full of cyro-chambers but just had to read the epilouge to make sure. I've read a few blogs on this site where people say that too many of this fanfic's have happy endings, which is much against the way Joss Whedon always protrayed his stories. But I love a happy ending and I think most of the 'verse does! Good on you for a great read! Think I'll check out some more of your stories when I have time. Cheers!

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