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Firefly: "Fathers and Sons--Part 2"

Thursday, March 9, 2006

Episode six of my second season of Firefly: The crew of Serenity scramble to get a deathly ill River to a place that can cure her, and they learn the hidden past of Kyo in the process. Part two of two.

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Firefly: "Fathers and Sons--Part Two"

Disclaimer: If I weren't just a poor college student and could finance the series myself, I would, but I can't. So all I can do is just play around in Joss Whedon's 'verse. Also, I don't know a lick of Chinese so I haven't bothered to put the translations because they're probably horribly wrong. If it were Japanese or Latin, well, that'd be another story...

Episode six of my second season of Firefly: The crew of Serenity scramble to get a deathly ill River to a place that can cure her, and they learn the hidden past of Kyo in the process. Part two of two.

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"How bad is it?" asked Captain Malcolm Reynolds at the door to the infirmary. In the passenger lounge just behind him, he could hear the cries of Gabriel and Regan Tam clamoring to know just what was going on. That was something Mal wanted to know himself; why five Academy children like River had woken prematurely from cryo-sleep; why River was deathly ill. But Mal knew "why" wasn't so important in a situation like this. What they were going to do, and how they were going to do it, took slight precedence.

"I suggest you let your gifted boy work his mojo," warned the rough, gravelly voice of Jonah Hex, Serenity's cook, to the distraught Tams.

"It's bad," said Simon Tam in a calm voice, but Mal'd grown used to the boy's stoicism, and knew fear when he heard it--maybe not so much when he saw it. He was still running around River's prone form on the operating chair, checking on tubes and periodically peering at the many screens against the wall. "I've managed to get her fever stabilized, and her seizures have stopped, but she's completely non-responsive."

"Well--uh--have you applied the cortical electrodes?" wondered Jayne Cobb who was standing on the inside of the infirmary, leaning against the door with his large arms crossed over his broad chest. Simon and Mal looked at the mercenary simultaneously, before returning to the conversation a

Comments
Thursday, 09 March 2006 11:15
This has been a most enjoyable read. Very well thought out, from the character arcs to the technical details. Very nice work.
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 09 March 2006 11:55
This series is consistently of the highest quality. Complex plots, Well thought out new characters and new insights into the original crew.

It's great logging on to find a new post from you!

Am looking forward to the next episode in your season 2.

Keep Flying
Taya
ANA
Thursday, 09 March 2006 12:19
Woo-hoo! Thanks, Geek. You're the best. "Cliffhangers? We don't need no stinkin' cliffhangers..."
ANA
Thursday, 09 March 2006 13:09
Alrighty, then, what can I say about this?

It's interesting how you put references from so many sources into these stories. It's always fun to learn new things. I find it rather amusing that you reference a comic book character and a 5000-year-old myth in the same breath. I like it.

I will admit to heaving a sigh of relief at the thought that they're able to go back to their normal lives. A lot of stories would simply take them on the run, but long could they live like that?

I also like how the idea of genetic manipulation still doesn't rest easy 500 years from now. Kinda makes you wonder, doesn't it? Even today, so much is happening so fast. The technology is outstripping our ability to understand just what it all means. Dr. Hikari's mental gymnastics over just what these creations of his were is both saddening and prescient.

At least there will always be people like Mal. He doesn't give a rat's behind where Kyo came from. All he cares about is that Kyo is a good man, and he's his friend.

My favorite line:

"So, what we got?" asked Mal, instantly shifting into business mode. They were manly-men after all, and they'd exhausted their emotional quota.

How...typically male ! :D
Thursday, 09 March 2006 16:24
I loved Jayne and the cortical electrodes! That line made me bust out laughing. Excellent series! You are a wonderful story teller, with engrossing plots and great characterization.
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 09 March 2006 16:32
Beautifully done. Wonderful way to weave in a lovely, complex little tale.

Be interesting to see what eventually happens with the Tam parents. Would like to see Simon meet Kaylee's parents as well.

And its good to see Simon coming to terms with River's 'relationship' with Kyo.

leiasky (too lazy to log in)
Saturday, 11 March 2006 04:04
Your stories make me smile. I also like your "Author's Notes, Justifications, and...well...Excuses:" at the bottom, they're just as fun to read. I can't wait for the next one :)
Tuesday, 14 March 2006 10:23
Haha, it's been a standard of every one of my writings to include as many homages as applicable. And yeah, technology makes so many leaps and bounds that everyone and thing, including morals, struggle to play catch up.

I had to further pay off the cortical electrodes. He worked so gorram hard in "Ariel!"

Yeah, Simon meet Kaylee's parents would be nice, and it might happen, but I haven't planned that yet. And yeah, Simon's finally coming to grips with the relationship.

And I'm glad you all enjoy my stories. Shiny comments do inspire me to keep going!
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 06 April 2006 01:06
Still love Kyo. Wish Hex had been in this installment more. You can't neglect the character I'm still iffy on my feelings on. He's just to simmilar to Shephard.

BTW, glad to know I was right. When they were explaining the where Kyo came from bit, my brain went straight to MGS. Nice to know it was justified.

Movng on to read more now...

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